yuumsarte
Yuumsarte
No worries! I want to reiterate too that despite the big post that I wrote, I absolutely love your comic so far. Excited to see where it goes! [:heart_02:]
I dig your comic a lot so far! I think the art aesthetic is really nice, and the genre is one that I've been enjoying a lot the last few years. Dropped a sub A few minor pieces of critique that I would give (beyond what's been said by others) are the following: 1.) This one's really minor, but th…
Huh, good point! [:sweat_02:] I didn't see that. Maybe just a bracket then.
I can tell your comic is going to be something BIG!!!!
Not much to say that hasn't been said already (I generally agree with BarBarKetrab and Kaydreamer), I just really like the art in your webtoon! I'm a big fan of the color palette and the textured look. Very neat character designs too. Keep going strong!
A couple of things. I'll break down what feels clunky for me. Try to avoid colloquialisms such as gonna. They're fine in dialogue, or if you are writing in the character's voice, but feel a bit immature in a summary. Any numbers under ten should always be written as words, not using numerals.…
You are nailing it so far! I love your style, it's so cute, yet you've successfully made it so creepy and dark. The story is interesting, and I'm excited to see where this 'game' will take them all. Sub'd. I'm seconding the bit about perspective. I mostly noticed in on the top-down view of the sk…
Like I said, it is a biased personal opinion of mine. I just think that the story may be a little more relatable if you include a character around Ares' age for her to talk to. It may be easier for the two to communicate with each other if they have similar teenage thought processes. The older cha…
I agree, really good start! This isn't my genre at all, but I enjoyed it and was intrigued by the characters. The art is really great - it's a distinct style that's gorgeous to look at and very well done. The use of color was very nice and immersive as well. My thoughts as far as constructive crit…
Wow, I have to say that the beginning of your story is quite good, definitely among the best stories that I have seen on Webtoon or Tapas (I am not lying). So anyway, here is my review of your opening chapters. Pros: You began the story with a clear base description and entry into the plot, an…