Alright, time to review Heritage!
Art talk:
The art is pretty damn solid. I don't have any problems with it really (also I have no suggestions for improvement, sorry )
Of course the colour pages look great as well, but I totally understand doing the pages in b&w!
Plot:
I think the plot is solid. It's one of those stories with a lot of backstory and past events. I think starting out with some action related to the mc's job on the other hand was the right decision imo. I got to know more about him this way
I didn't read all your pages due to the 15 minutes so I'm unaware if this happens, but I think it would be a good idea to balance out the past and present events in your comic to avoid a flashback train. But from what I have seen you seem to handle it pretty well. Keep it up!