Anyone want their series reviewed? I’m trying my hand in it🙂‍↕️

KeinanX 2024-04-29 21:09:57 UTC #1

Hi, I’ve been on this site before back in 2022, and have walked away from writing my story for a bit and just wanted to see how I’d do reviewing works instead for now, comics and novels are allowed. If interested I’m here to talk, thanks

Leyelle 2024-04-29 21:11:16 UTC #2

Sure, i'd like my series reviewed. What are you looking to work with/do?

KeinanX 2024-04-29 21:16:57 UTC #3

Anything with a story that’s has effort from the creator, it can be a romance, action, comedy or drama/thriller, I be down to read it, comics also sound super fun personally but novels work too.

Leyelle 2024-04-29 21:23:02 UTC #4

well I definitely put a lot of effort into my story lol.

KeinanX 2024-04-29 21:47:09 UTC #5

So finished your first chapter and am planning second now, just want to say your prose is well developed, I can feel your main heroine’s experience, the flower garden on steroids was funny ngl. Grammar is also good which is a mustYour dialogue is pretty witty too, so keep at it, makes reading very immersive! I also figured Kattar was going to crash since they were driving through deep snow, thank goodness he didn’t drink though, all and all I will read next chapter now and do a 5 chapter review since full series will take quite a lot of time.

Leyelle 2024-04-29 21:48:51 UTC #6

five chapters works lol. thank you. I know it's a VERY long story.

kyupol 2024-04-29 22:00:14 UTC #7

Here... Give mine a shot.

IndigoShirtProd 2024-04-29 22:07:14 UTC #8

I don't really need a review, but if you're looking for something fun to read

KeinanX 2024-04-29 22:31:13 UTC #9

Ok chapter 2 and 3 of your amazing novel so far, for chapter 2 your prose is very extraordinary! I felt as if I was in that accident! Sheesh! The part with the endless hum of over-bright, LED electric lights sings in my ear was like eating amazing frosting off a cake when it comes to reading novels! I can tell you’ve got experience! Also chapter 3 with your Interpretation of PTSD is super believable! I truly hope it’s not an actual experience since you are so skilled at describing! I want to read more, I will finish my final review of your series at chapter 4 and 5 stay tuned!

SirCoockie 2024-04-29 22:39:02 UTC #10

If you are still interested, i would like to hear it

Leyelle 2024-04-29 22:42:58 UTC #11

Thank you so much.

this is definitely one of the nicest compliments that I think I've received lol.

KeinanX 2024-04-29 23:14:23 UTC #12

Ok, chapter 4 and 5, I can tell our main heroine has been in a very distressing state and is on edge throughout her wait for her boyfriend‘s recovery, I will say the prose in chapter 4 was pretty centered and that I did get lost a little, not to say it was bad, in fact it’s clear on the second read through, as for chapter 5 I’m glad to see things might have worked out hopefully but I won’t spoil too much of your series since we’re are not on a private forum. In any case I had a blast! Great first 5 chapters, I might just subscribe but know I recently just came back on this website. All and great novel with excellent prose, pacing, dialogue and 1st person perspective!

Leyelle 2024-04-29 23:17:33 UTC #13

Thank you so much for the review, and I'm glad you liked what you've read. If you don't mind me asking, what do you mean by the fourth chapter being 'pretty centered?' (it'll help me make a note of how I can make sure my writing is clear and understandable for people.)

BoomerZ 2024-04-29 23:26:06 UTC #14

Could always use a review.

KeinanX 2024-04-29 23:38:36 UTC #15

It’s not too centered I just had to reread it because I still struggle a little with some prose so I didn’t mean anything rude by what I said, all and all great novel you have going on.

Leyelle 2024-04-29 23:41:38 UTC #16

@KeinanX

oh no no no, I wasn't offended. I was legitimately asking so I can improve as a writer XD. Don't worry, i'm not upset or offended in the least. I'm open to commentary even when it's constructive criticism. Thank you for taking the time to review my story.

LouisWinter 2024-04-29 23:45:49 UTC #17

I need a review. Like a (BLANK) needs (BLANK).

BLTX 2024-04-29 23:57:28 UTC #18

Id love to get a review for my comic!

GarzaGoose 2024-04-30 00:53:05 UTC #19

I'm always looking for active criticism on my comic! I like it when people are honest. If you're interested, tell me what works, what ya like, or what doesn't haha.

Have you got any works too?

LostKelp 2024-04-30 01:15:36 UTC #20

Sure thing homie, check it out here if you'd like.