Man I feel you. But I feel like when I sweat I'm losing my creative juices lolol
Chapter 1: I love the description of the scenery. It flows really well and I can literally feel where I'm at, you know? Like, I feel like I've been somewhere like that before. It feels familiar in a good way. I would totally love to buy some of Folen's produce right now. You have a great way with words when describing scenery. However, just as a suggestion, I think it would be best for you to establish character features (as in, the way they look).
Chapter 2: Alsia wasn't written in Chapter 1, so I'm a little confused to her relationship with Solvi. I understand that she plays a major role in this scene, so please elaborate a little more about her importance. Again, I think character descriptions would be really great for this scene! I can feel Solvi's pain very well- she feels pitied, humiliated, confused, and hurt. The chaos in this chapter is very well written.
Chapter 3: I love this scene of healing. I think it wraps up the ordeal really well, and emphasizes on Solvi's determination to avenge and find what has been stolen. I would love a little more description on the type of weaponry she fixes/ how she spends her days. Since you're so good with scenery description I would recommend you to write about the aftermath of how the village looks.
Good luck to you in your writing endeavors ! I look forwards to seeing how this goes on!
