Because I'm in the house bored - link your novel/comic! [CLOSED 4 NOW COME BACK LATER]

[anmitsuu]

I've gone ahead and decided to read Papillon! I think what you're doing with these novels is really bold and unique approach. I think it would be cute for you to include subtle Easter eggs among both of them with small characters being in each story (does that make sense? the heat is frying my brain)

Chapter 1: I'm unsure if you want to do so for the nature of ambiguity, but I think the selfie on the wallpaper would be a really great Segway for you to introduce all five girls (if they're going to be in your novel in the future). Just little descriptions about what they look like -- or even just their names for us as readers can show us what to expect. Faye has very little dialogue in this but you've done a very good job at showing what kind of person she is. Someone who's quick on her feet and cannot help but to aid other people. Good job!

[kmlangleyauthor]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate your feedback!!
The ambiguity is definitely intentional (and goes on for quite a while LOL ) and I’m so glad you read their chemistry!!!!! I’ll definitely think about how I can work in a few extra hints to that first chapter. As for getting tagged... it’s referring to beaten up and essentially having someone new scout out their target... and apparently I’m really bad at explaining that slang

[CodeMonkeyArts]

I'll check out your stuff and shall leave my novel here!

Birth of a Sin | Tapas

[anmitsuu]

I've gone ahead and decided to read Words. I love comics that make the reader think a little bit!
I love the formatting of these one panels. Have you come up with these yourself? It's something that's incredibly universal and can be relatable to any reader. Great job! I think that it's very insightful and great commentary on todays society. But, what's wrong with creating a Facebook page for your dog? I think its cute. I love the unique characters that you've integrated as well.

[anmitsuu]

Hey, thank you for the sub! I just subbed to yours as well!
For the prologue, I think you have written a lot. It's a big read, and I feel like sometimes people might be deterred from finishing through the chapter and/or might skim through it because of how many words are on one page. My suggestion would be to separate it/ structure it in a way that would make it more eye friendly to the reader. I understand that information is important, but putting so much information in just one chapter can occasionally be intimidating to a reader. The second chapter reads a lot better, with good dialogue and better art. I feel like it improved, somehow? Maybe it's the backgrounds- I love how they're subtle enough to add to the environment and not take away from the main characters.

[anmitsuu]

Ok I see you with that Manga style way of reading -- I love it! Just as a suggestion, I think you should put a censor on your work. Since it's pretty gory/violent I think that Tapas might have a problem with you not doing so. For the younger kids, ya know?
Man is your artwork incredibly. It's super intense in a way that really sucks you into the plot and withdraws visceral reactions from some who is reading it. You've done an incredibly job at invoking my emotions. Your shading as well is very amazing and totally adds/ drives the plot line. My man Dion really just swallowed a whole nut, lol.

[anmitsuu]

Hey everyone! I've been at this for quite a while and will be taking a break. I really love reading all of your novels and stories so I will resume tommorow! Thank you for this opportunity of growth!

Everyone who's reading this please feel free to continue to leave your stories/comics! I will review them when I get the chance! And please feel free to check out my novel too!!

AWARE | Tapas

[darkone4587]

Hello there if anyone's curious to see I have two novels here on the site I'm actively working on and uploading.

Blade Quest | Tapas

Dual Soul | Tapas

[drcharlotterodricks]

THank you so much ^-^

[lauragarcia511]

To anyone interested in fantasy, here is my current webcomic.
Enjoy!

Knights of Geomora | Tapas

[WLHcomics]

Glad you liked it! I actually used to watch total drama a lot, I should really go and binge watch the entire first season rn. the comic wasn't blury or grainy when I uploaded it to my Instagram a long time ago, (some of these are comics I made in 2018) or when I made the re-edit for here, I guess it's probably just uploading it to tapas, it also did something similar to this when I uploaded it to DeviantArt for some reason. Amy is actually wearing a thick head band, (I used to have one when I was a kid, it was white with red roses on it) Ironically, I actually have another character who wears beanies all the time, you probably seen him in the first comic, but I can definitely see how it looks like one.

[Lunar-Turtle]

Thank you so much for reading and subscribing! I'm really glad you like the comic Yeah, I personally don't like the vertical format for comic. I think they work the best in the classic page format. Few people already told me that my comic has 90s vibes to it, I wonder why, like what is causing it.

And I'll be completely honest, i would love to have my characters, mainly animals a plushies, lol.

[Schwarze_Neko]

Alright, why not ^^ Already subbed to your novel! My comic is fantasy/mystery with a bit of humor here and there. The main character is a girl called Elizabeth that lives during the time of the Black Plague, and on top of that, she discovers she has a talent for magic. But there are a lot of struggles she must go through to learn what she wants... Let me know if you liked it! ^^

Nevermore | Tapas

[Hutch-Comics]

Heatwave has finaly died down here, still kinda of warm but a lot less 'melt anything that generates heat'.

Monkey Episode I | Tapas

[SleepyHaku]

Thanks! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed my manga!
Hmmm yeah, I guess you're right. I was thinking whether I should put a mature restriction on some of my episodes or not, since naturally with blood mages, a lot of blood is involved, and thus everything gets gorier by default. Although, I personally think that I'm just way to desensitized to that kind of stuff, so I never saw it that severe.

[WOSTR]

Thank you for the feedback.
I need to start proofreading and figure out how to switch off this auto correct.
I've so far written about 5 characters and I'm still in two minds about how I want it to 'read'. I like narration and want the reader to really get to know the mains, yet simply see the side characters for their feelings, words and actions, all a means of establishing significance, though I may beneifit from rearranging the chapters so that this comes across sooner.

[Merj]

Thanks so much!!! Mërj Revolution is about Multicultural mythology, i can't wait to show more, the world around the characters will change a lot by they actions. is really nice of you to make this kind of topic here on the foruns, i'll subscribe to your series! lets support eachother?

[ExA]

Let's having fun together
Here my comic​
superhero:
https://m.tapas.io/series/Kenzfuture-star
Fantasy:
https://m.tapas.io/series/XPDCCORONA

[R.n.P]

The Rolling Stone | Tapas

here's mine if you're interested

[ComicOfThe5]

Wow thank you so much for your kind review I am really glad you like it