Can you read my chapters and share first impression?

Miniwrites 2024-08-10 10:58:03 UTC #1

Title: Murder in the Devil's Den
Genre: Thriller, Suspense, Supernatural

Chapters: Ongoing, 1 chapter every 2 days.

Summary: Young detective becomes trapped in a deadly game orchestrated by the devil. She must race against time to learn and stop the devil's sinister plan.

Link: https://tapas.io/series/Murder-in-the-Devils-Den/info

Please read the chapter and let me know what you think. Your first impression and things you would suggest for improvement! Thanks in advance!

angelic16demonic13 2024-08-10 11:32:59 UTC #2

Sure thing buddy. I will try my hands on this.

Miniwrites 2024-08-10 12:43:32 UTC #3

Thanks! That would be really helpful!

angelic16demonic13 2024-08-10 12:50:28 UTC #4

I send the review to your author page. You can check it there

Miniwrites 2024-08-10 17:15:03 UTC #5

Thanks! I really appreciate it!