So I'm thinking of cutting the prologue from my story. My original idea was that it would add an element of mystery to my story early on and maybe add some tension.
However it's got a lot of out of context dialog that's organic to the characters in story but I wonder if it does a disservice to the first chapter that centers around the MC a much more normal dude and what he's doing and how the main conflict starts.
The prologue highlights a character that is mentioned in some of the other early chapters but won't be formally introduced until later on.
Also I do acknowledge that my story has a tendency to jump around and has a lot of named characters so in an effort to reduce that I was wondering if I should cut it and maybe relocate it closer to her formal introduction.
Here's my comic what do y'all think?