Firstly the cover art is a pleasure to look at.If you ever published this as a novel it would sell several copies based on the art itself.When you said one chapter, I assumed it would be one page or a single episode, however that is irrelevant since all 3 episodes that I read were brief and to the point.Your art reminds me of the art I find in graphic novels.Were they your inspiration? In addition to that , I tend to find music distracting while I'm reading at times, however when I saw the comments section, I decided to play the track anyway and it seems like you have selected music appropriate to your chapter.
Good job!