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Aug 2021

Ok, this is my first time doing this.
I just designed a new OC .
It's a dragon magical girl. However I'm not confident in the design. So if any one in the community would like to redesign her give it a shot. (Basically see if you can come up with a better design than mine!) If I like the design The best one will be featured in the upcoming chapters of my webcomic series Manga Academy.
You will also be credited and given a shout out on my home page.
As well as $50 prize / or an art request (within reason I've gotten weird request before). If there is no clear winner. But I still like certain elements of their design. I may incorporate them into the initial design. The designs I borrow from with also get a shout out.
This is very experimental Please be patient.
Deadline is till Sep.10
Here's the initial design. I wanted to incorporate both east and western influences. Use this as your jumping off point.

If you have any further Questions let me know.
Also While your here, Check out my web comic series Manga Academy. There's already over 100 pages worth of content so give it a read!

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Your character design is honestly way better than anything I could ever think of :joy:

Wow. What a great contest. But I’m a writer...

Don't underestimate yourself, you have a solid design there. Anyway, this contest seems fun :grin:

Your oc is really amazing!
But this is so fun and great contest :slight_smile:

I already looks very cool, but as a fashion designer I can't avoid to try :eyes: I'll try to imitate a bit your style for you to have a bit of idea of how it will end up looking like. Does it have to be orange or I can try other colors?

K... K... K....Kawaii!
I am a subscriber, and if you say this character is going to be in the Manga then I will die of happiness.

Here's my design for her!
I based her clothes off the Bhutanese Kira, as Bhutan is an asian country known as the Dragon Kingdom.
The shoes are based off hi top converse, the socks are based off japanese kawaii aesthetic, and the jacket is based off military jackets (Sgt pepper style).
I removed the wings, added claws, slit pupils and tendrils to keep with the "asian dragon" theme. I kept the hairstyle and colour scheme though.
I hope you like my version of Lily! I also subbed to you :slight_smile:

Decided to try redesigning her as well. The original design already looked pretty good, just needed some tweaks here and there. Anyway, I decided to go the Chinese route for the eastern influence. Looking at her nurse cap, I'm guessing she must be a healer, but I thought it would be funny to turn her staff into a weapon as well (based on the wushu monk's spade). That means she could either heal people or bury them. 8D

Anyway, this redesign challenge was an excuse for me to draw a cute girl, so it was fun.

I had way too much fun drawing this + trying out a new drawing style.

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It's a bit rushed. If I had time, I would probably play around with color schemes more because something about this looks a bit off. Especially the tail.

summary

Mine was based off of korean dragon (yong). The dress, sash, shoes, overlapping neckline, and norigae accessories were all from hanbok, so the silhouette is a bit different than the original cupcake silhouette. The hair is inspired by joseon noblewomen hairstyles and (unintentionally) sailor moon.

I don't think western dragons have dragon pearls, but I added one in her wand/staff. Western dragons also have wings but korean dragons don't so I took them out (I thought it might look too complex with them anyway). The horns of both yong and imugi are usually thicker and less like branching antlers so that's what I went with.

Honestly I think this design is way better than all my OC designs just because of my lack of creativity. Anyways this contest looks fun :smile:

Can you give me some more info on her personality/character arc? If I want to communicate effectively through her visual design, I need to know a little more about her.

Sir, how different do you want the redesign to be? Are different outfits and colors fine?

I see the entries and they kinda seem like "draw them in my style". Is that what you want oooor

You asked for a re-design. So in my case it went through a complete metamorphosis.


I think it's up to you. Most people took elements from the original and used them as a base for a new design.

I used a similar skin tone, hair color, stockings, and sleeves just because I liked the way they looked.

Here's mine.
I went with a strange mix of a kimono-tutu with feathers-like things.
I had fun with it, long time I didn't draw a cute character. For the colors I totally went with "creamy-mango-white-chocolate-and-hints-of-raspberries" because the simple thought of it makes me craving fruity cakes and her original design dress makes me think of a delicious puffy cake.
The flower patterns on her dress are peonies (they look like roses because I dunno how to draw them XD).
Also her staff became kind of a naginata... but maybe I should have made a bigger blade and more stylised because it just looks like a regular spear? HMMMMMM.
edit : I changed the blade. It looks more like a naginata now :sunglasses:

Also I ended with a ginormous picture size, so get some close up on few things.

15 days later

The contest will be closing soon. Sept 10th deadline.
A winner will be decided.