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Apr 2021

Alright, who's around? I need to know if this line is okay:

"She notices the aroma of multiple dishes being prepared filling the room."

Does it sound confusing?

F*** Grammarly for underlining 'filling' with red! I didn't have this confusion before! GAAAAAAAAH!

Edit: The problem was solved. Thank you to everyone who lent a hand.

To me, it looks right... but my first tongue is not english n_nU

@darthmongoose That makes me think she's the one filling the room :laughing: I tried that not too long ago...

@IndigoShirtProd Present.

@Aleksei Thanks. If it's not confusing a non-native speaker then that's one piece of tension off the checklist...
Now to just get the grammar right.

I would skip 'being prepared', unless it is really necessary. But it really depends on context.

your sentence is grammatically correct. Grammarly is really just wrong sometimes. I've honestly started ignoring it less and less

What about this:

"She notices the aroma of the multiple dishes being prepared fill the room"

I'm not sure if the "the" is necessary but what about "fill" instead of "filling."

I know. I'm just joking around :laughing:

:heart:

I think if you go this way it will need to be "fills" for a singular aroma. Easy to get confused with plural dishes between the aroma and its verb.

Oh yea because the verb is based off "the aroma" and not the "multiple dishes," so that would be more correct.

Wait..... realizes he didn't put any thought behind the last reply Uh-

I'd go for something like this:
"She notices that the air is (now) filled with the aroma of multiple dishes being prepared."

Do you need to mention the room in the sentence?

@crowstories
Nope, still keeping 'fill'.

@DanielRKM Yeah.. I need to keep the room in it...

Thank you, everyone! This is the final version:

Snapping out from her engrossed reading, she notices the aroma of multiple dishes being prepared fill the room.

Nicely done (he writes to satisfy the 20-character minimum on replies).