Hi, I’m a new writer both to help his platform and in general. This is my very first attempt at a fantasy romance novel. I’m not asking for a subscription (in anyone does, then I’ll be grateful and sub back, but it’s not necessary)
All I need is good writers to critique my work and give feedback on two things (be as brutally honest as possible):
1. Would this story be better if I were to write it in first person?
2. Are the first few chapters boring? Should I change them a bit so there’s less info-dumping and more intrigue?