I request for help in reviewing my mistakes

GSSC 2024-10-02 10:07:22 UTC #1

I AM UNABLE UNDERSTAND WHAT MY FLAWS ARE!!! SOMEONE PLEASE CRITICIZE MY WORK AND TELL ME WHAT SHOULD BE IMPROVED!!!!

Stargazer31 2024-10-02 13:06:07 UTC #2

Maybe ask nicely instead of demanding? I'd be happy to review it if you asked instead of demanded. If you're being bossy, you might put off potential readers

KevinReijnders 2024-10-02 13:08:59 UTC #3

abigaillmartin 2024-10-02 14:36:56 UTC #4

vfaqvrf 2024-10-02 16:06:32 UTC #5

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WildMoonCrow 2024-10-03 05:28:13 UTC #6

I think if you ask in a less demanding way, you might actually get someone to take a look at your work :3
Also, you need to change out your cover and thumbnails, Tapas does not allow AI generated stuff of any kind…

GSSC 2024-10-03 13:35:08 UTC #7

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GSSC 2024-10-03 13:35:56 UTC #8

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GSSC 2024-10-03 13:39:02 UTC #9

@Stargazer31 I am extremely sorry for my ill behaviour and I will keep in mind that it will never happen again
@BreeBaxter Thank you, I'll try improving the mistakes stated from the part of the story from where I am working right now
@WildMoon Yep, I'll change the ones that are breaking rules

@abigaillmartin @KevinReijnders OK

vfaqvrf 2024-10-03 14:08:11 UTC #10

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abigaillmartin 2024-10-03 14:12:09 UTC #11

Also I’m just going to get this out of the way. We are willing to help you but it’s just the caption of the post rubbed us all the wrong way. Does that make sense?

abigaillmartin 2024-10-03 14:13:43 UTC #12

I’m sorry for the judgmental Houdini. I just didn’t know how to react.

BellaTheCow 2024-10-11 00:56:21 UTC #13

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BellaTheCow 2024-10-11 01:11:05 UTC #14

Yeah not gonna lie, at first you did seem to come across as kinda mean. But then again, I agree with @BreeBaxter that we’ve all had our moments! So as for me, all is forgiven. ️ ️

Now then, did you want to do a review swap? My link is here if you do consider this. I’m also available for sub4sub

I’m available to review about three to five chapters. Also what would you like for me to critique?

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