I need feedback on my novel! I am thinking of editing the chapters but I am not sure where I need to pay attention and which part needs most editing. I will appreciate if you can review 1-2 chapters of my novel and provide feedback. Feel free to DM me your feedback! Or of course, share your feedback in comment! I will appreciate both!
Title: Murder in the devil’s den
Tags: Murder mystery, thriller, horror, fantasy
Status: Ongoing
Current Episodes: 4
New Episodes: Weekly, 1 episode every Monday
Warnings/Triggers: Death, Murder
Link: https://tapas.io/series/Murder-in-the-Devils-Den/info
