My "Summerdays"3 series
1. Yes, and there will be more of them
2. Yes
3. Does fighting scene count? It's like "aggressive negotiations" according to a certain movie!
Bonus. Yes
Ooh interesting! Let's see.
The Angel with Black Wings1 is a slice-of-life fantasy drama story of a boy who can see Guardian Angels and befriended an Angel who has mysterious set of jet-black wings instead of white.
Yas! The Angel with Black Wings and Silver (though Sil doesn't look that feminine)
Yas! More like arguing rather than talking.
Ya-- wait... They were talking about Ray... (a boy) Not exactly the main topic (cus they were arguing about the Angel's rules) but he's involved. Oops...
Bonus: I don't think so. Most of the characters are Asian since I'm Asian and the setting is in an Asian country. Silver is the only one with an American-looking face.
Answering this as it currently stands, from the pages I've drawn (even if I haven't posted them all yet).
Does Grassblades pass the Bechdel-Wallace test?
1.) Have more than one female character (named+spoken lines)
Yes. Akane (who, uh, doesn't speak for story reasons), Chouko, Lady Watanabe, Kazue, handful of yet-to-be-revealed female characters.
2.) That talk to each other at some point in the story
Yes. The first thing Kazue does when she turns up is speak to Chouko, and the various other female characters do interact.
3.) About something other than a man
Yes. The first conversations between women in my story (Kazue-Chouko and Chouko-Lady Watanabe) concern things like meetings and duty and new missions.
Any PoC women?
Yes! There's Kazue for one (she's the one in the first panel on this page1), though honestly, most of my cast are intended to be PoC, though some are less obviously so than others.
(Note: I'm calling it the Bechdel-Wallace test because that's what Alison Bechdel herself wants it to be called).
Let's see, U-Speed is about a 13-year old boy who will go into a school made by a giant automobile company after being homeschooled his entire life.
1) More than one female character? Yes. In a sport dominated by men, I have a few female characters.
2) Talk to each other at some point in the story? Yes, since they are in a motorsport ennvironment, they did talk and will do talk to each other at some point.
3) About something other than a man? Yes! One of the female racers was the best in her time, and she motivates the younger female drivers that they can be dominant. So it's not talk about a man but the sport of car racing.
bonus: women of color in your story? A comic about racing that has diversity in race. So yes, there are and there's more to come.
- There are more named female characters than male characters. The "real" protagonist is also female.
- The female characters have plenty of conversational exchange, although in the uploaded story so far, it's mostly monologue and "nice to meet you" type conversation.
- While there are key moments where they do discuss one of the main characters (a male), there is plenty of conversation about plot-important things unrelated to him. The "love" plot is secondary to the main plot.
The PoC character isn't technically applicable because my characters aren't Humans.
Let's see... The Key to Reality 1has a female main character, and she talks to a woman in chapter 7... about hair lol. The little girl loves hair and braiding soooo
In chapter 6 I think we also have two little girls talking to each other, playing and then climbing up on a roof. Then telling a female teacher to basically go fuck herself. That should count as well.
The Key to Reality has two named female black characters and one smaller black male character who is seen in chapter 2.
Bloodroot is boyslove so the main characters are male... But there's still a black female character, and then an implied lesbian couple. These two of course talk to each other.
I have three female characters planned for future chapters that might end up getting their own entire sideseries to the comic.
In my comics the female characters are usually the ones with willpower and attitude though so I have no problem passing a test like this xD
Warmage2 has:
- Two named female lead characters: Mary Sue (black, larger woman) and Cassandra (Genetic construct Cheetah/human)
- Who have numerous conversations.
- Only some of which are about the male lead.
Eagle
(and if you haven't read any of Bechel's comics, you should)
My comic Polyphemus1 doesn't pass and I think about that a lot! I've tried to think of a way to make it pass but because it's based on already existing Greek mythology it just doesn't work with the plot no matter how hard I try. Thanks Homer! There's only one main female character and she hasn't appeared yet, but I want to do my best to represent her well and make up for the fact that she doesn't pass the Bechdel test. :')
The character I mentioned was going to be a POC until I read the source material a few more times and realised that she is constantly described as having fair skin... If it had only happened once I would have ignored it but almost every time she's mentioned it's brought up. :') Instead I'm having one of the upcoming male characters be POC (they basically swapped appearances) because I'm trying to make my comic racially diverse as well as fitting in the setting of Ancient Greece!
My comic is Destiny Awaits! It's a paranormal-action story set in the deep future where four people have been assigned with the job of saving the world. In one way or another.
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Have more than one female character...
Oh yeah, totally! The three main characters are female, and there's lots of female antagonists and side characters. -
...That talk to each other at some point in the story...
Of course they do o3o There's so many, they've gotta interact -
...About something other than a man
With the world facing impending doom, there are much more things to talk about besides men XD
And I even pass the bonus rule! Two of my protagonists, one of my antagonists, and a handful of background characters are all WOC. Only the protagonists have been revealed though o3o And that's Kayla and Tai.
Yep, both LR LoL2 and RoC1 do.
As our description says, it's a story about shamelessly rich people, where boys cry, girls are pervs, and everyone's unreasonably hot. XD
- Have more than 1 female character?
-Yep. Both mains are girls, 4 second mains are girls, a lot of villains are girls, and a whole lot of minor charas are girls. All named and a bunch of them with spoken lines. - Talk to each other at some point of the story?
-All the time. And for longer than 5 minutes, I'm sure. XD - About something other than a man?
-They rarely talk about men, to be honest. It's more likely to have guys talking about a girl. Convos go from casual chatting to very important things for the plot. - Bonus: Are there any women of colour?
-There are, we have a lot of people of various nationalities. Besides, almost all of our demon charas have darker skin.
The stories might still be too young to prove that yet, but it's a fully developed storyline. XDD
I have to add, though, there shall be Yuri too.
lets see if Los Esmeraldas1 passes
- Have more than one female character... (preferably named, and have spoken lines) yuppers!!!
- ...That talk to each other at some point in the story... (preferably hold a conversation as opposed to saying a single line to each other) they sure do and fight!!! and one takes a bite out of the other!!
- ...About something other than a man (preferably not a filler conversation, a talk that has substance to the story).
A sort of extra rule is that they talk for "5 minutes" but since that's hard to measure in comics, I'll file that under "holding a prominent conversation". oh yes!!! tons of threats!!
Another bonus rule I like to add is: are there any women of color in your story? . you betcha!!
looks like it passes! my ladies are strong female characters who are independent and don't need a man lmao
Mine fails hugely 8'D
More than one female character:
n-no. Not that I have planned. In fact... my 1 female character hasn't even shown up. There's been one woman in a background scene so far who doesn't say anything.They talk to each other:
nnnno. There's no one for her to talk to.About something other than a man:
The character mostly has interests in religion, so most her dialogue is about that. Or drugs. Or murder. But she also ends up talking about guys a lot because... with a cast of 4 main characters, and 3 being men... It can't be helped.
I might have to fix this, but at the same time, I think adding in another woman for the sake of having a woman would just make a token character situation. I'd rather have 1 fleshed out and interesting female character than 2 poor ones : S
But if anyone has advice... Please!
For Demon House, where a girl lives in a rental haunted by demons:
1. Yes, I have lots of females in this series.
2. Yes, they have plenty of interaction.
3. Yes, they talk about stuff other than guys.
and yes Tula and her best friend are poc.
For Erie Waters, where a guy on vacation gets tossed into the drama of a drowned man, a water witch, and her right-hand dog.
1. Yes, of the four characters, half are female xD
2. Yes, Jenny and Nelly talk a lot.
3. Yes, they talk about their relationship mostly.
well, Jenny's not really human, neither is Nelly, but Nelly's human form yes. I depict her with a slightly darker complexion, suggesting a mix of ethnicities, since Newfoundland dogs were supposedly bred from Portuguese working dogs and others.
For Heavy Horns, about the relationship between two guys
1. Yes, there are more than 1 in the story.
2. As of right now it hasn't happened yet.
3. Um... well two of them talk about family, but mostly about the men sooo strike on that lol.
Yes there will be poc women!
A failure of the Bechdel-test doesn't mean you've written a bad story! It's a test that is mainly used to illustrate how rare it actually is, in general, for any story to have two named female characters who speak to each other about something other than a man - regardless of quality. There are terrible stories that pass the test, and there are great stories that don't.
It's just something that we as creators should be aware of; often, when creating a story, there is absolutely nothing stopping us from having more members of the cast be female - but an unconscious bias gets in the way. So many stories are exclusively - or mostly - about men that we become used to thinking of males as default and normal, when in fact that isn't the case.
So my advice is this; keep this test in mind going forward, and the next time you sit down to create a story, ask yourself "Why don't I make more of the cast female this time? What's stopping me?" - because the answer is probably going to be that nothing is stopping you.
1.) Have more than one female character (named+spoken lines)
Yes. Three so far and more to come.
2.) That talk to each other at some point in the story
Yes. Women always talk when they gather. Always.
3.) About something other than a man
Yes. First interraction included asking about a guy but it's more so that the MC could figure out what the heck was going on. Second time was sprinkled with sarcasm and attitude.