Okay, I was going through some of my old stories and I found this piece that I want to keep working on. It does need revision, but I could use some feedback as I restart this project again.
The link doesn't seem to work. Maybe you mistyped something?
EDIT: The info shouldn't be capitalised -> https://tapas.io/series/Kingdom-By-the-Sea/info
I noticed that. My computer is being weird today. Thanks
I just posted chapter 3 of "Kingdom by the Sea". I'd love people's thoughts.
(unrelated, but shouldn't the title be "my new novel" not "new my novel")
Hello, hello. I am a professional copy editor. Would you like technical feedback or are you just looking for general reader feedback? I may have time to go over a chapter or two in the next few days.
Ehh... Probably. haha. I'm a bit dyslexic. I'll go change it.
I'm just looking for some more general thoughts. This isn't my main project. I found it going through some of my old word docs and wanted to start it up again