Fuzed
Fuzed
Hi, my name is Fuzed.
I'm the writer behind Occidendum. If you like assassins and would like to read a story with filled with action, well-choreographed fights, and an interesting twist on the world of assassins, then I've got just the thing you want. 
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- Nov 24, '20
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Thank you!! 
I hope you're still enjoying the story
Hi there! Here are some promotional posters for my series Occidendum: [image] [image] And here's the link if anyone would be interested:
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I might've sounded like an entitled idiot offering critique... I never wanted to sound like that and only wanted to help. Well, lesson learnt. I'll try to be more mindful of what I say in the future.
I legit spent 5 minutes trying to figure out what a 'userpic' was. 
I was going through all the available dictionaries and then I realised I recently changed my profile picture... It's too late for this and my brain clearly isn't functional anymore.
Yeah, it did grow up. Got a slight upgrade. I'…
Love all of the designs! Those are some pretty amazing sketches and ideas. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your work.
Well, I never said I considered myself a "full-grown turtle" and I never claimed that the description I provided was a masterpiece. I just wanted to have some fun. I'm not sure what elicited such reaction, whether it was me trying to help you when I thought I could, or me just having fun, but either…
Very true. I remember the first time I got criticized on my writing, I didn't want to listen to feedback and always played the 'writing is subjective' card. Then, I found a professional editor and realised that I'm actually an atrocious writer and have a looooooot of room for improvement. Now, I …
I'll have to go with a 'no' on that.
Right? Isn't just an amazing thing to do right after you wake up?
Lovely description. Just a little thing that might be more of a personal taste, rather than subjectively wrong writing, but some of your shorter sentences, such as 'The sun had risen, however.' and 'The wind had picked up.' could be merged into one longer sentence to make the description less choppy…
Oh, I love the fact that you included a character. I've also never heard the word 'guesstimated' and I think I just fell in love
Great job!
Hello guys! I hope everyone's having a lovely week so far and that you're all staying safe. I have been helping a friend of mine with some creative writings for school. He had an image and we needed to come up with a brief description. We crafted something that I fancied a lot. So I thought if…
I update once a week. My chapters are between 1.2-4k depending on the content. I write between 4-5k every week, so I have an extra buffer that is gradually increasing. I also send over 1 chapter every week to my editor. And once it's sent back to me, I review it and then send it for some fi…
What if my characters already are lunatics?
In a world where assassination is legal, you can't really expect anything else.
The MC is 14YO and he's already a manipulative sociopath, while another character manipulates people into killing each other and laughs at it...
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Here's mine: https://www.instagram.com/fuzed_occidendum/ Here's Korez' (#1 artist for Occidendum) https://www.instagram.com/korez_art/ and here's derroj's (#2 artist for Occidendum) https://www.instagram.com/quick_sketch_derroj/
Thank you!
Here's a higher quality image of the artwork.
There's a comic coming soon, hopefully with the same quality.
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Also, if you would like to support the artist, check out this Reddit post I made earlier today. You can see his progress and his IG is linked in the comments! Th…
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Here's my action novel:
I hope you'll like it
So, my friend starting drawing digitally in 2017 and he made a picture showing his incredible 3-year drawing progress. If you could go and show him some love on his IG as well as upvote a Reddit post I will be linking below, that would be incredibly helpful. I would love for it to go trending and…
Hi there! This is an interesting idea. It's hard to find scenes that will be funny without context so I'll try to provide some before you read it. The chapter opens up with Nathan (MC) fighting against several enemies. Once he beats them all, he falls to the ground, exhausted, and notices that the…
Murder and assassins might seem as topics pretty dark, But at the start it doesn’t seem so grim with a joke and an occasional snark. Now you progress further and the lights go off; what’s that noise? The lights are back on, but… only thing you see is blood and no poise. Well, that's the best I…
I hope you'll enjoy the concept. The comic will hopefully be coming out later this year, so maybe that will be easier to get through than the novel, if you have troubles with the language Für mich sind beide Deutsch und Englisch Fremdsprachen so ich verstehe es vollig, dass es anstrengend irgendwas…
That's a good question!
Currently, there is only a novel: I would be more than happy if you'd take a look. But the comic is currently being made and I expect that it will start coming out by the end of this year. Hopefully, it will be weekly or biweekly. They use many various weapons, ranging from katanas, knives, …
You did a pretty good job on all three of them.
The tattoo worked out pretty nicely as well.
Also, just a little side-note, the character's name is Daeril, and he's an assassin in the world of Occidendum. In this world, assassination is actually legal and he's a leader of an official assassin…
I'm curious to know how you'd draw this character
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Have fun drawing and thank you!
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Fair... xd. You seem kinda knowledgeable so I thought you'd know.
Would a drawn character design work as a substitute for a written physical description?
It all depends on the song! It's a bit of a gamble, since someone might dislike a song and hence dislike the comic/novel just because of the song, and vice versa. But I read a novel written by @ratscout where she uses music in every chapter and I thoroughly enjoy it. And in case I don't, I jus…