chapter 1
part 1 -
Panel 1 - saloon’s interior we see drunk Jackie in the foreground almost sleeping at the counter with three bottles by their side and a cup, in the background we see other people at the saloon
panel 2–The barman with a serious face points a gun at Jackie and says – listen here! gonna work here for free until you pay the tab or I’ll put a few holes in your skull.
in the same panel jackie with a drunk face says – why don’t we resol- "hiccup" -ve this in a better way? I know of a secret "hiccup" that 's worth lots of credits,can tell you but only if you drop the gun.
panel 3 - close up in the face of the barman
the barman asks suspicious –and why would you tell me that secret?
panel 4 - jackie puts their hand in their heist we see a gun holster – you don’t know how much I hate wor-"hiccup"-king specially dish washing and this sort of thing, I’ll do anything "hiccup" to get out of it
panel 5 - bartender and jackie facing each other, bartender – you're lying
confident jackie – no, I really "hiccup" hate washing dishes…it’s worth a lot of money.
panel 6 - bartender with his back, jackie in front, barman suspicious – tell me or I'll shoot
Jackie – then you’ll never know cause I’ll die before I tell you "hiccup"
panel 7 - close up on the bartender face he thinks
panel 8- close up on the bartender’s mouth he says – ok, I’ll drop the gun
panel 9- the bartender drops the gun on the floor close up of the gun hitting the floor
panel 10 - open shot we see Jackie and the barman Jackie takes out the gun he had with him and points it at the bartender. The bartender raises his hands in the air and sweat runs down his face as he grinds his teeth —the secret is that you're a big sucker, now hand me the most expensive bottle of booze "hiccup"
panel 11 - Jackie leaves the bar with a bottle of booze
panel 12 - jackie walks in a street of a wild west futuristic town among aliens, robots and cyborgs in a purple sand desert
panel 13 - open shot birdseye view from the town
end of part 1-