looks great so far to me!
i honestly don't love the font you chose for the text, its a bit thin, & the changes in text size are pretty obvious in confusing? but i dont think its something worth redoing it for so lol
the art is absolutely fantastic, i love how clean it is, the exprssions and movments read very clearly and the shots/positioning and even like, the way the panels interact with eachother is very dynamic!
i feel like we should get to know what the plot is going to be about a bit sooner (im a bit fan of establishing pages, esp first page intros, giving u the info u need on what the plot's gonna be) unless it's just "daily life of a vampire" in which case godspeed