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I'm willing to read and even give a review. But note I refuse to read the following: Sexual content, gl, bl, trans or LGBTQ.
beyond that, I'm fine with romance, gore, horror, or other genres.
ill just give a free review just make sure and say you want a review.
If you want here is my story.
here is the story-


Note I apologize for previous misunderstandings.

Ps. these are free you don't have to read my story if you don't want to.
I also get to the reviews when I can so please be patient.
That and keep in mind I'm pretty honest with my opinions.
So just know what you're asking for.

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Okay, if you could give a review of this one I’d be especially grateful. Thankfully it does not have anything sexual in it so far.

Ok, so I already see the main issue here. It's, not art style, it's the dialogue bubbles and the text. What studio system do you use?
Because beyond that, forgive me if I'm wrong. But this is what I got what happened. There is a society of snowmen and women and the main mc is a snow woman who has a magical amulet/ neckless and how they find a girl and want to help them.

Would you give mine a review?
It's a fantasy, not a romance, but there is a lesbian romantic subplot. You don't have to read it if you don't want to.

I'll give it my best shot! :slight_smile:

Ok, so the art, really cute! no problems! Plot no problems it was pretty clear. The only problem per say. It's not even that big. Is I've noticed is the text bubbles themselves. There are a little bit shaky and you may want to pick a few different types of font so it's easier to see who is talking. Beyond that, the plot is pretty fun. It makes me think of some older cartoons that used to be on the cartoon networks.

Snowmen only. Snowmen are an all-male species, Also, Erik is male. Also, I just use the Art Set app.

Can you review my novel too?

So you're telling me this is effectively a read/possibly a review swap, but you expect the other party to read 70+ chapters? Is there something about this that I'm misunderstanding?

it was intended for those who had already read the story and had gotten that far. I hadn't expected so many new people. Im currently working on some thing better for new readers.

Hello! General feedback on how this reads so far would be great if you can

I'm open for an honest review of my story.

Hello, here is mine:

Burning Tears

Feel free to check out my novel and subscribe if you're interested:

This is my work. I'm sure you'll love it as soon as you read it. If you like it, don't hesitate to subscribe.
Note: The title is sensitive but the work is not. So you can rest assured.

The story is revenge-based, the art is black and white with gritty lines. The dialogue is clear and the bubbles are smooth. Honestly, unless I became a Karin I really can't find problems.

@neidarous Burning tears, honestly it's really good, the pacing is well done and I LOVE the premise of this story. I've actually been reading this one for a while.

Hello! Thank you for the opportunity. If you still have time, I also want a review. Thank you so much!:blush: I don't have much chapters so feel free to check what story you want to make a review.

Hey, a review would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.