9 / 31
Aug 2021

I'll give it my best shot! :slight_smile:

Ok, so the art, really cute! no problems! Plot no problems it was pretty clear. The only problem per say. It's not even that big. Is I've noticed is the text bubbles themselves. There are a little bit shaky and you may want to pick a few different types of font so it's easier to see who is talking. Beyond that, the plot is pretty fun. It makes me think of some older cartoons that used to be on the cartoon networks.

Snowmen only. Snowmen are an all-male species, Also, Erik is male. Also, I just use the Art Set app.

Can you review my novel too?

So you're telling me this is effectively a read/possibly a review swap, but you expect the other party to read 70+ chapters? Is there something about this that I'm misunderstanding?

it was intended for those who had already read the story and had gotten that far. I hadn't expected so many new people. Im currently working on some thing better for new readers.

Hello! General feedback on how this reads so far would be great if you can

I'm open for an honest review of my story.

Hello, here is mine:

Burning Tears

Feel free to check out my novel and subscribe if you're interested:

This is my work. I'm sure you'll love it as soon as you read it. If you like it, don't hesitate to subscribe.
Note: The title is sensitive but the work is not. So you can rest assured.

The story is revenge-based, the art is black and white with gritty lines. The dialogue is clear and the bubbles are smooth. Honestly, unless I became a Karin I really can't find problems.

@neidarous Burning tears, honestly it's really good, the pacing is well done and I LOVE the premise of this story. I've actually been reading this one for a while.

Hello! Thank you for the opportunity. If you still have time, I also want a review. Thank you so much!:blush: I don't have much chapters so feel free to check what story you want to make a review.

Hey, a review would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

9 days later

Review Please. You can pick just one if two is too many.


I'd really appreciate a review on Donnie The Fighting Psychopath. Positive or negative.

If you're not too inundated I'd really appreciate a review of my comic