That’s right!I’m giving back to the community.
Hit me with your comic snd I will read and review until I pass out.
What to expect from me.
Let me introduce myself.
I’m the only fictive character and fake profile that is approved to be alive here at tapas. I have escaped my own creators stupid comic called Blue Life and I’m here to serve you. (For a while)
Hahahahaha
Now. Who dears to let me take a look at what you have created???
Hello, thanks for doing this.I love getting any kind of feedback on my manga series. I'm currently on a hiatus but I return with a longer prologue and more pages.
traditional format
webcomic format
Thriving off constructive criticism. If people say there’s something wrong with a certain aspect of the art then that’s a problem I must fix. Gathering what I can to improve my art.
So yeet. Thank you for the opportunity!
The art is rough here. (This one is mostly purple, sorry)
Red’s review of Bleakville
Let’s start with the art:There isn’t much red in it.
But for a colourless comic I found some grey and white between the black. Something is blurring and something is extremely sharp. But the art is indeed good. Way better that anything @jensrichard77 could ever doHahahahaha
Then there is the story: There is a taste of something??? Something that made me think That I’m not from the real world.
Anyway. More red colours and your comic will be great
There will be plenty of red for colored pages!Thanks for looking at my comic Red.
So uh...I literally just started making comics (few days ago whelp) and its important to know these are mini-comics based on my novel. Each comic is a stand-alone comic, all meant to spice things up and get people to read my novel omg. XD
It may be weird to ask but I'd love to see if people would enjoy this...I still have much to learn about this medium.
No problem. Oh and here is a tip.
Don’t be afraid to make it a notch into the horror genre.
I feel you are in a difficult balance of your target audience. Jus go all dark
My review of Anti-Deity
LOOOOVEE THE USE OF REDHAHAHAHAHA
This is what I’m talking about.
Ehmm
Art:Your art is very unique and have a great vibe to what you find most popular here at Tapas, but still it is also a rare style. but you totally destroyed the good with the text bubbles
OMG Pleas do something about that.
The story:You have a great buildup and this story can go anywhere. I’m more into hard core action. But you have something good behind it all. It feels like there is a whole worldbuilding behind.
Please continue. I think there is a audience of boring blue people like @jensrichard77 that would read it.
Hey why not lmao, here's mine! It's a fantasy/mystery manga, let me know if you liked it! ^^
@redfrombluelife you have to remember the little group that write novels here on Tapas. They love to be part of all this Tapas...S..
I have a novel and I know @jensrichard77 love this story. So what about you?You say to to @maddmoniart RED! More RED! You should know in ep.7 a RED Sorcerer will come. You say to @noros0617 you love hardcore action, so from ep.7 there is a lot of action to you @redfrombluelife And it keep going and going... Then also a great story and a lot of Meow between all the action. I also have a big worldbuilding to this world.
If you only like comic then you have to make a review from the episodes pictures that follow the story.
Here is a trailer for you:
And here is my story
And @redfrombluelife remember there is 114 people that loves this story... Uh that loves him the EVIL RED SORCERER. So do you best...uh...no... You Red thing to review this.
Nice try @LarslaustsenNow here take a cookie and go away
I'm getting very little feedback so far so it would be awesome since it's you Red.
Uh come on I put chocolate on it and set it back.I have paint it red
What about the even smaller group that does both novels and comics?
In the same story?That it totally Green!
I make a serious novel and a comedic little comic, they're unrelated but I do do both.
Yeah I’m starting to realize that the way I did the speech bubbles must go. Not the first time I heard it, so I know it’s an issue now. Thank you for the feedback!
Your stuff is awesome though.So addictive
Hey Red, wanna review mine?