Get Your Webcomic Reviewed!

[anakarenina]

Muchas gracias por la crítica Blacksanz!!! No pensé que tan pronto me tocaría una. Me alegra mucho leer todas las cosas lindas que dices del cómic, y cuando Jany (la escritora) lo lea seguro se alegrará también. A veces es difícil saber si los personajes son creíbles, pues una como creadora los entiende pero no sabe si somos capaces de mostrarlos como los tenemos en la cabeza jaja

Te agradezco mucho por el tip de usar planos diferentes, lo aplicaré tan pronto como siga una conversación más, yo también lo considero como mi talón de Aquiles, así que voy a tratar de mejorarlo analizando otros cómics, mil gracias!

[keii4ii]

I would love to join in the reviewing, but I find the thread VERY confusing. It's hard to find the the three comics that haven't been reviewed. Could there be a way to better organize this thread? Maybe introduce a new rule, marking which comics (in your review post) need to be reviewed by the next person? Since the next person will be reviewing two comics out of the three + the comic by the previous reviewer...

[Blacksanz]

yeah I had the same troubles! I was the last one, so I feel like it is my responsability

then you should review @anakarenina (haytham) @Cielle (Reus) and me @Blacksanz (The ninth circle)

and the next posting after you, should review you @keii4ii @anakarenina and @Blacksanz

this way each one of us gets three reviews, I guess...dit I got it rigth? ^^U

[Jrej]

I found it pretty straight forward so far.
You just have to locate the last review post done.
Use the two last comics and the reviewer's one.

And it goes on.

We could totally sum it up by the end of the post, to help the process.

[keii4ii]

You just have to locate the last review post done. Use the two last comics and the reviewer's one.

There's no guarantee the last reviewer did those reviews in the "correct" order, that's the thing. @Blacksanz (who kindly posted which ones the next person should review) did not. We should definitely start adding that at the end of each review post.

[Jrej]

You're definitely right!
I guess it was a quieter post earlier on. So it was less confusing...
Hope this continues. I find it a nice way to discover new comics and get feedback on ours!

[Merryweatherey]

The thread isn't meant for everyone to only get 1 review. You're meant to give the 3 latest uploaders comics a review each. That way they each get 3 reviews, and you get 3 reviews from the next 3.

[Jrej]

Yep that's what I though.
I think it works quite well if you're reading it right.
We'll see how it goes...

Next reviews should be Reus, Haytham and The ninth circle

Read away and have fun!

[muhdreams]

Sure I'll give a whirl at it!

@Cielle -- Reus
The plot and characters are interesting enough for me to keep reading, and your art compliments your characters; if that makes any sense. The colouring on your comics really nice and it makes everything stand out much better too! As for advice I would say to clean up a lot of your speech bubbles. I found it to be a bit messy (especially in the prologue) and so it made it a bit harder to follow along. And someone above me also mentioned it, but I do agree that you shouldn't be using onomatopoeia as much, unless its absolutely necessary.

@anakarenina -- Haytham
To start off, at a first glance the art and colouring just blew me away! What I liked a lot was that you let the art do the talking, and carry the story along. Although I do have a tip for the art itself, but take it with a grain of salt, but the art definitely improves with each issue. So despite me praising the art, I do have one thing to note though, is that the action shots don't look "actiony"? I guess to kinda explain what I mean, in the Nadin's Lyre when Annibal attacks the squid, it looks like he's just holding a sword up in the air rather than attacking. Overall it looks fantastic and I'll be sure to keep an eye on it in the future!

@Blacksanz -- The Ninth Circle
I like the action scenes, it is well done and it grabs my attention. Furthermore I like the art and the coloured pages looks really nice. One issue I've is that I found the panels a bit too cluttered together. It might be my bad eyesight but I found it a bit hard to follow along. That said though it was a lot easier on my eyes at least adding in the black background on the later chapters, so maybe you could try incorporating that or having it as a larger resolution.

I guess another general thing to note as well is that, for me personally is to make shorter episodes. Longer episodes means theres much more to take in, and maybe I could be a bad reader but I had to do multiple reads on a few pages to fully absorb everything I'm reading I guess. (And I'm guilty of it but I get lazy with longer episodes that I just sometimes just keep scrolling). This is probably me looking from a writing perspective but shorter is better I find at least. I'm not giving the advice to like upload single panels; but like 2-3 pages rather than prologue lengthy I guess.

Hopefully my advice/review/critique helps! Take it with a grain of salt, I'm still a novice with all of this anyways. Anyways here's my comic, its simple strip panels with goofy punchlines.

[Jrej]

Thanks for joining in @muhdreams !
Glad more people participate for this one!

Next reviews should be Haytham, The Ninth Circle and Mediocre At Best!

Let's get this party started! 8-D

[Zannen00]

Oooohh errr.....my comic got a review even though I did not contributed anything to this thread! O.o
I got some free time (FINALLY!) So let's get this review started!!
(DISCLAIMER:I am only a amateur artist,please take my review as my opinion and view.)

@anakarenina Haytham
Art:The Fantasy world is really well done,with background scene of every panel Clearly shows where the characters are.
Every character is drawn distinct,so you won't find any same face here!
But the colors...oh yess if the story doesn't interest you, @anakarenina GORGEOUS coloring will make you stick around!
The quality in this is what you will usually find in sold graphic novel!

Plot:Just from the first episode,things go down bad quick!But after that,the pacing of the plot is slowed down a bit,with characters explaining on what happen,reason's,ect:Here's where the Creator nailed it,every episode is end just at the right note,with plot hook.You can relate to the protagonist feeling's,How one day your Dearest to you just did something outraging,and leave without explaining anything.

Rate:8/10 #have a look you wont waste time

@Blacksanz The Ninth Circle

Art:As this is a Fantasy Action comic,you will find many action scene,which is done well,panel with action perspective,
Armies fighting armies,Bloody scene,Monster slaying and the occasional zoom at my face because im angry panel!
The character's dresses according to the setting,I have the Conan the barbarian vibe as i look thru the pages,
And The Characters,while some of it looks generic,some of them looks really BADASS!!
The backgrounds are well drawn,and while most pages uses grey shading,some of the colored pages is Stunning!

Plot:The Comic started out as a good vs evil,with the evil on the winning side,as the story progresses each characters is fleshed out with their own chapters....and up to this point there is more question than answers given so i can't say anything else about the plot

Rate:7/10 #action scene galore go read it

@muhdreams Mediocre At Best

Art:Simple Stick man with expression,but is more than enough to tell a joke ....

Plot:Its a Gag panel strip....BUT!!Every episode i read (so far only 12 ) punchline make me chuckle!

well i uh...dont know what else to say....so...

RATE!!:5/10....its....MEDIOCRE AT BEST!!....Dont let the rating get to you.You have a good sense of witty humor there,keep doing more!
#take a look for a good chuckle or two

PHEW!This took longer than i thought!!Heres mine comic IMAGICA=verse

I..guess the the next in line is The Ninth Circle,Mediocre At Best and IMAGICA=verse.

Got a question though,what happens if people that has participate before want to participate again?
I mean...not many people even participate in this thread....a shame but,i can understand given the time to read thru and write...STAY AWESOME GUYS!

[Jrej]

Thanks for the reviews Zannen00!
Looks like you had one for free earlier on!

If you wanna jump back in, I guess you would need to have some more content or another series to show.
I think its best if everyone get a shot at this at least once!

[Zannen00]

Yes,i was like O.o...then decided as soon i got some free time I'll get to reviewing!

And yes I'll need to have more content lol we are going to need a few more contributor in order for us to participate again....i hope

[Jrej]

Another option for reviews is also checking WintreKitty's topic which allows that.
The waiting list is long but the review would be very detailed.

WintreKitty Reviews

[Blacksanz]

Thanks @muhdreams and @Zannen00 !!! I found your reviews very fair and helpful (and it is true that right now there are more questions than answers given -_-U)

let's see if moaar people wants reviews XD

[Zannen00]

Good Golly,why didn't I notice that THREAD??

Thanks for pointing it out, @Jrej ! will ask soon!!

[Jrej]

Glad I could help!
We'll definitely get reviews quicker in this current topic...
The power of the crowd!

[WintreKitty]

We'll definitely get reviews quicker in this current topic...

LOL I sure hope so!

[Jrej]

I meant no offense @WintreKitty !
Please don't take this the wrong way!
It is more feedback here than actual full length reviews.
It can't compare to the work you are putting in!

[WintreKitty]

No worries! I'm not offended, I actually laughed out loud reading that comment because it's true! It takes a while to write a detailed review that I am content with.