Why did you create two threads with similar titles? Please do not spam the forums.
As for your comic.
I think your premise is interesting. But I feel like your writing is a bit confusing. Your updates are way too short to develop much story and you seem to recycle pages. I also recommend reading up on panel composition.
I also agree with finding a better font.
For the art, the characters look cute but I feel like you need to work on how you apply color. You will sometimes use a soft edge brush and it ends up looking a bit amateur. I would also recommend not using the blur tool.