Lmaooooo the first page is hilarious and so relatable for parents. Great dialogue writing! The art looks a bit stiff but I’m pretty sure your art is inspired by origami art.
This was printed in DINA5 format, that´s why I limited the panels on each page
Reminds me so much of Garfield. Interesting art and colors.
I don´t see this but I loved Garfield when I was a kid
I don't know if minimalist or simple is what I'd use to describe my comic at all. But it's still interesting to see what different people think of it. No hard feelings.
Kinda late, but here's mine!
There’s a lot of dialogue and I personally found it distracting. The art panels are very closed together as well. I love the pop of colors, reminds me of the 80s
Ok, I'm interested in what you have to say about it.
I found the first page interesting and pulls you in immediately. It’s cutely drawn, but there’s an imminent danger between the two character’s’ interaction. Great job!
Yeah, I'm trying to evade those problems with the dialogue and the panels in the current episodes. This is the first comic I uploaded online so I didn't know how to structure the pages to make them more readable for others.Thanks for the first impressions @Chocolate
You just better be thorough!
Thank you ^^ I tend to avoid going over 150 words per page so most of my pages aren't really too full because I want the art to shine, there's just a couple heavy ones that go over when necessary to get some key info across.
Aight go crazy:
I love the opening to showcase the MC is a narcissist snob lmaooooooo. But is your comic mainly comedy? Be careful of making too much jokes and your readers will think you don’t personally take your story seriously.
Sure, why not:
Ohhhh be careful of not introducing the main characters in the first page because your readers are there to find out more about the MC. The colors are a bit darker idk if you want to go for a more gothic feel.
Since you've been keeping up with this thread ...
Is this about slice of life? The dialogue seem slow and melodramatic, idk if that’s the vibe you want for your comic. Art is beautiful 10/10
Okay..
Ok, let's see what you'll say
