Hello 🩷 asking for your opinion if I should keep my original blurbs or go for the new ones for my two stories 🫶
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SONG IN THE SUNSET - AN ANGEL'S MISSION
New blurb:
My heart keeps telling me to stay and listen to his song in the sunset.
Natalie Austin is not supposed to catch Dave Castillo, her lazy classmate, singing while playing the guitar under the dogwood tree, her favorite place in the world.
And she is not supposed to catch feelings for him.
Something about Dave pulls her in, and something about their future should definitely warn her that risking one’s heart is destined for heartbreak.
But what if she wants to take a chance? Will Dave see her, or is he destined to fall into the orbit of another sky?
Because a song in the sunset is fated to stay and remain.
Original blurb:
The sunset is a witness of my story.
Natalie isn’t expecting to fall in love with Dave.
But a change of feelings sparks quickly when she catches him singing her favorite song while playing his guitar.
She suddenly sees him in a different light and notices the real Dave, who is beyond kind and sincere, with a voice so beautiful and whose passion is playing the guitar.
Set against the backdrop of St. Louis, Missouri, this openhearted teen struggles to accept her growing love for Dave. Despite that, she fights to keep him in her life. Will she follow her heart to stay and listen to his song in the sunset?
CHEWING GUM - AN ANGEL'S MISSION
New blurb:
Discover music, magic, and love!
Two rival rock bands, brought together by a miracle, kept together by… chewing gum?
The Jupits and The No Name Band only dream of one thing: to make music and sign with the biggest record label in the world.
And the only way to achieve that is by winning The Band Gig.
At first, their rivalry proved they were born to perform separately, but a sudden twist made their music universes collide.
Now, united as one band, will they rock and succeed?
With music, magic, and love, anything can happen if they believe.
Original blurb:
Discover music, magic, and love!
Two rival rock bands brought together by a miracle.
They all have one goal, one dream— to perform with Michael Serenade, their favorite singer, and sign a two-year contract with the best record label in the world.
But will they give up their ultimate dream, for love?
Can they be kept together by... chewing gum?
