Hey bruh, lets share your protagonist (from your comic)

[azureXtwilight]

I like your idea! I wish that you have a clearer ref of your character and not just a sketch, so I can see their design more clearly.

My comic

The Seventh Re:Set | Tapas

I actually have two protags, Mike (the blonde one) and Gerald (the tall one) :

"Mike is 17 years old, despite how she looks. But she is still a minor, so don't think of anything funny. She likes her eggs soft-boiled, and for some reason claims that bacon is a food of heaven. If she asks for a gummy bear, don't allow her because that's a sign that you are allowing you to ransack all your whole food storage. Don't forbid her to do anything because it'll make her do it anyway, keep her occupied with a mystery stories or just turn on the TV. If you find her in the street looking lost or getting in trouble, her social security number is XXX-XXX-XX or just call me at (COUNTRYCODE)XXX-XX-XXX." ~ Gerald

"Gerald is my sidekick/partner/cook/dishwasher/washing-machine/butler. He just claims to be my guardian, which is totally uncreative. He is known for his subtle sarcasm and is weak against mature women. Even though he has a rough exterior he tends to be quite gentle in the inside, well, except if I'm somehow in trouble and his berserk-mode-thingy is triggered. Even though he keeps complaining that I am reducing his life-span, I know that he enjoys my company."_ ~ Mike

[Wumbl]

Okay sooo...

This is Radical Jason (that's his code name... his real name comes later in the story)
I think the best thing he's said so far is, in response to "You think you're hot shit?" he said "Yeah, I do. You got me."
He's a Mexican-American hitman (age 25) in the anarchist micronation of Jahannam, who has a penchant for showing off with firearms and hitting on people he really shouldn't. (so far, a highschool girl and a guy of the same age he had beaten up really badly... he's messy)
He has a tattoo on his back that says "mierda de boca" which essentially means "shit from the mouth" and is translated from the british slang term "gob shite"... it's an ongoing joke with my characters that several of them are somehow associated with the phrase "gob shite". Just bc I think it's funny. He also has a little cactus tattooed on his chest that he probably got while drunk with his idiot drug dealer friends.
I say drug dealer friends because he frequently works for Mr Moscow's Angry Office, which is a drug syndicate. As a result he works alongside dealers a lot, as their muscle.

He's also totally got a week to live and doesn't know why, but it could be something to do with his serial killer ex who is coming into town and leaving bodies in her wake. Possibly.

Flirting With Death | Tapas

[kklekc718]

Alrighty, let’s do dis.

Jillian “Jill” Susan Pecos.
Recently graduated from High School, the tall young woman, Jill, wonders about her future, whether to be a hero for the world or taking over her adoptive family’s ranch. She later receives an invitation to go to the Hero University, where they teach the new generations of heroes the moral construct as well as teamwork and national laws.
She often speaks in Texas slangs, which confused her roommates.
She has the incredible power to run at blinding speed with raw strength. She can calm and tame animals, as well as control phenomenal storms (Tornado, earthquake, etc.). Oh, and she can punch ghosts like they’re physically there.
She does not know of her past, except that she was lovingly raised by a Mexican were-coyote family.

[dawgofdawgness]

Heeeeere's Frances!

quote: "I'm the professionalist person you've ever MET"
summary: Frances will stop at NOTHING to become the most famous jazz trumpeter in the world. Feelings, mental health, and friends don't matter. All that matters is that sweet sweet recognition.
personality:
- super passionate about what she does
- pretty annoying
- She's a little crazy
- total ditz
- cocky, full of herself
- she's got High Expectations™
scenario: a robber goes up to Frances: "give me all your money or I'll shoot! You try and run and you die."
Frances runs.

here's muh comic

[DiegoPalacios]

Name: Rocky

Quote:.........(his wisdom trascends words)

Summary:The main character of the comic. Is Rocky....an actual inanimate rock. He is the chosen one to save the world from the forces of evil. Everyone, except for one character treats Rocky like the biggest hero ever and villains are defeated by Rocky in spectacular ways.

personality: For what is shown in the first chapter: "Rocky is a stoic and humble hero, who is also a great listener. He isn`t afraid of anything and his wisdom trascends words. He never starts a combat, but he always finishes them. He has a dark and tragic past he havent talked about with anyone."

Here is my comic

Rocky the rock | Tapas

[Lee]

This is the Hero

Quote: ...
Summary: He is the archetype of the chosen hero, an orphan farm boy that takes on the quest of defeating the evil that reigns over this world.
Personality: -The hero is a parody of several videogame main characters, specially Link, hence no quote.
-No regard for other people belongings
-Persistent
-Incredible Luck
-Powerful Mage, though he cosntantly changes his class
Scenario: The hero finds himself in need of gold to pay for an inn, so he goes to the woods to attack a couple of wild innocent wolves, or as he sees them, Low Level Monsters. After defeating them he takes all of their gold.
And this is my series

Clueless Hero | Tapas

[Vanesalisa]

Luke and Mrycella

Name Luke Bartholomew Cassidy

Quote : I'm not a hero and I will never be one.

Summary : he's a runaway boy when he's mother left his dad , this cause to test his sanity throughout childhood , few years later he became a forensic scientist and still looking for answers

Personality : quiet
nerdy
serious
awkward
nice
troubled

Scenario : if he has one day to live what would he do ?
Luke would try to test the lighting theory from the Flash

Name : Mrycella Aubrey Rosalie Clara Antoinette Hathaway

quote : is this the face I care right now
summary : new detective from New York (can't tell you her past )
Personality
sarcastic
nice
scary
annoyed
bored
serious
hard-head
easy to be mad

scenario: if she was trapped in the elevator with one of the Beatles the young version with suits which member will she make out with ?
Mrycella would choose George Harrison all the way , she has hots for him.

here's my comics

Hollow Creek | Tapas

[phen]

Protagonist from There's No Such Thing as Jason - I.T., 18 year-old Jason Centrall, nickname "View".
Quote✦ "Guess I'm just nervous, y'know, bein' alone."
Summary✦ Freshman Jason's a technology klutz but he's most concerned with the weird way the people around him seem to be changing. He's painfully shy, relying on his tiny circle of friends to help him avoid loneliness as he adjusts to life as a college student.
Personality✦ Anxious, forgiving, meek, needy, loyal, eager to please, somewhat impulsive
Scenario✦ Getting on an elevator, he desperately hopes no one else will join him while simultaneously terrified of being the only one on it. He balances on the threshold, listening and considering whether or not the stairs might be a better choice. Then a small group of students, chatting loudly, file in and he's forced on, into a corner. In his nervous rush, he misses the elevator button for the floor he needs.
Student 1: "Anyone need me to push their floor for 'em?"
Glances are exchanged but Jason tucks his chin into his chest, staring down at his mobile screen for fear of talking to a stranger. He has to ride the elevator all the way to the top floor and, by the time he reaches his level, is late to class. Staring at the door, another terror of walking into a class in session grips him and he ends up returning to his dorm (all while texting a friend to distract him from this awful experience).

REVIEW: @wumblebumarts and Radical Jason (another Jason with another nickname, awright!)

Firstly, the design is really nice. He has a crazy cool hairstyle and a nicely subdued colour palette. And your quick backstory on him grabs me right off. To match his rebel looks, he's a hitman with roots in an anarchist location. This kind of big personality shows! The smaller details as we go reflect a great deal of his character and what his role is in the story.

You did a brilliant job fleshing his badassery out with the impulsive nature that seems to cultivate his dealings. Establishing the sociopolitical sphere of his experiences should flesh out the remainder of his identity. Nice touch with the in-joke of his tattoo~

[TheArgoNinja]

Krator Demoni

"I figure I can kill some time by doing some killing..."

Mummified Bounty Hunter who isn't really one for small talk. Best way to describe him is as a perpetual grump. If you cross him, however, he may end up breaking an arm or two.

Imagine a scenario where Krator is trying to collect a bounty on someone. Krator's the kinda hunter to follow them into a bar, sit next to them, offer a drink only to then slam a glass mug in their face. That's when the fun begins.

He's the protagonist of my comic, Demoni.

Demoni | Tapas

[Wumbl]

Nice touch with the in-joke of his tattoo~

Everything I write is just in-jokes RIP...............
ALSO thank u so much for ur review and it's totally wild ur main character is called Jason too hehe

[LittleMissDevil]

That is hilarious. This short summary has convinced me to check out your comic. From the character description alone there come several funny scenes or subversions of "the chosen one" story to mind. So... good job

@phenylketonurics: I really love the design of your character! The picture is energetic, the colors are well chosen and that happy smile just puts me in a good mood ^^ From the picture you wouldn't guess that he's as shy as the description shows, but I think this is a really nice contrast. Good job!

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I' showcase the protagonist of my comic The Machinist

"I will leave this miserable place and finally live as a free person."

Silhouette is a young woman living in the slums. As most people there she has to not only live with a slight deformity but with the oppressive regime she lives under. However she doesn't plan on staying and is working hard to leave her country and seek refuge in a better place. The circumstances of her life have hardened her and she isn't very social. She seems to build very functional connections to people instead of deep friendships. Her greatest joy comes from working with machines and the fact that she couldn't get higher education frustrates her greatly. She is very independent. strong willed and has a high knowledge of the things, that interest her. And she is convinced that she deserve to put that to good use.

Scenario: The sun was just rising above the skyline of Lamila as a young, blue haired woman climbed across the piles of garbage that piled up in the center of the slums. But she was not alone on her search for worthwhile items as a man with unsightly blisters covering his face watched her warily. She gave him an short but angry look and continued on her way. She wouldn't find what she needed here anyways. The mechanical trash usually was unloaded a bit further east. And she wanted to be there quickly. A conflict with the other salvagers was the last thing she needed. And more and more of them where coming.
"Hey, Silhouette..." she heard someone behind her say. She turned and gave a smile to one of the salvagers that she knew for some time. But she turned back quickly and made her way to her goal. No more distractions. "I will be gone soon anyways", she told herself.

As you can see Silhouette is really not very social, but maaaaaybe she will change through the comic?

[Im_moron]

@kklekc718 (hears texan slang cuz I'm Texan)
I'll say partner, I won't have anythin against y'all if ya exaggerate ma slang a tiny bit
(Also that's a fairly broad scope of powers, character wise, I hope she has a character flaw, capability wise, not too much of a problem, just wanted to point out she can do a bit much, like superman or something, if she's intended to be like superman)

@dawgofdawgness Francis would totally summon the yellow king for fame and fortune, that's why we all love her (also the revelation that she'll blindly chase fame makes me like her more :U everyone in the artistic culture lowkey wants to be famous, even if it might screw close friends)

@DiegoPalacios @Lee
The dark lord, fiddling with a powerful potion cloaked in shadows in the corner takes notice of the legendary chosen ones

She immediately hugs the corner in a cold sweat in hopes that they don't see her (chosenone o' phobia)

[indagold]

My main character Japhin:

Quote: "I want something new...to explore..."
Summary: Just a run of the mill regular person trying to get his life together, save up some money for school with strange sorcerer parents who dote after him and are a little too overprotective; visiting him often while he lives alone. Eventually his mundane life changes when he meets some old friends of his.
Personality: Very obsessed with doing the right thing, too trusting at times and a little bit shy though his shyness breaks when he's upset or in a situation that compromises him. Later on his personality becomes more hopeless and listless.
Scenerio: Someone may try to mug him at knife point thinking he can't fight back, Japhin might accidentally anger the demon with him, injuring the mugger badly in self defense. Japhin further traumatized and the demon confused why his host is so upset.

All Broken Gods :: Cover | Tapas

[TimCaloweh]

Three main characters.

Isaac

Quote: "Shut the hell up!" "The thunder might get to you, but that rain never stops getting beautiful."
Summary: An agent working with the American military to find and report on a rumored super weapon being developed by the aliens. His past is complicated.
Personality: Willing to get his hands dirty for the mission, Isaac is battle hardened. He's racist towards aliens for personal reasons and seeing as how he works with an extremely annoying alien, things get a little chaotic. However, Isaac is merciful when it comes to the innocent which is why he hasn't flat out abandoned Henri and his lost cause.
Scenario: If Frank walked up to sleeping Isaac in the middle of the night and said, "Isaac, I can't sleep," Isaac would punch him so hard he'd go unconscious. "Here's hoping you don't wake up."

Henri

Quote: ...
Summary: Henri was born to a single mom. He never met his dad since he went off to join the resistance and hold back the alien offensive. After losing his mom, Henri felt it was time to find his dad and tell him what happened. This is a problem since his dads been missing for years now. But being a stubborn kid, Henri still thinks his dads out there somewhere. He just needs to make it to him, behind enemy lines.
Personality: Henri is quite smart. At a very young age he would constantly take things apart and try to put them back together. His ambition to build and fix things increased as soon he joined a Spanish unit and learned to be an engineer. He's quiet most of the time and the horrors of war hasn't helped. But at times Henri can learn to slow down and have fun when he's with his friends, Isaac, Frank, and the clone army.
Scenario: Every time a clone dies and turns to dust, Henri would collect each pile and put it in a jar, vase, really anything he can scoop it into. And even though there are about five thousand clones, he would make sure to name each one so they'd at least die unique.

Frank

Quote: "I'm a bun!" (gets shot) "I'm a donut!"
"Rude, question mark?"
Summary: Frank is just as mysterious as Isaac. Being small, green, having strength with unknown limits, and indestructible Frank is a bizarre yet useful character. The second reason Isaac hasn't killed him yet is cause he needs an indestructible shield. After claiming to have been abandoned by the rest of the alien forces, Frank and his clones didn't really do much other than try and be human. Though his clones may just be fragile copies they all share similar dreams of being human.
Personality: Frank is joyful about almost everything. He envies humans cause they have such interesting lives and personalities he can only replicated. Just recently realizing the cruelty in war and man's decision to continue the concept, Frank aspired to be more like Henri since the kid still has his innocence and morals intact. Frank has three goals: make a big book of every recipe on Earth, collect all kinds of music from the planet, and make the world's best pizza Isaac claims to have the recipe for.
Scenario: Frank once found two pictures. One of them was a photo of a ship in a bottle. The other was a photo of men at sea on board a Man 'O War ship. Thinking both ships were the same size, he stupidly crafted a giant bottle and built a life size Man 'O War ship in it. Luckily this came in handy when the group needed to make a swift getaway.

The Rainy Days | Tapas

[Ghostie]

Quote: "I can't tell a joke to save my life. HAHA, I'm dead!"
Name: He only goes by Jester, now. Too much time has passed by for his punished soul in order to know anymore.
Background: In the RP this was started in, he was damned to hell for something he'd done with his twin when he was 22. Both were punished in hell as demons (devils are wardens, demons are punished souls,) together tied by frost and fire since they clash and fight, and because of the nature of their crime, incubus hunger.
Summary: In the comic, 200 years in the future from the RP, he's long established as an assassin in a mob, run by his twin children, Azren and Cordia. They have a really low moral compass, but Jester's has always been more prominent. It's not perfect, he's not a good guy, but is more prone to doing acts of good than most others. This compass and his hellish punishment is the reason he is the protagonist of "The Deep Blue: Taboo."
Personality: Obnoxious, fickle, and prone to pity and love. Is a demon, but shows tendencies for not acting like one, on occasion. When given orders, due to his respect for his children, can be ruthless, though he suffers guilt.

His scenario, including hints of his guilt and morals, is in the first few pages of my comic already - I'm trying to establish that early.

[-The Deep Blue- Taboo] | Tapas

[Zaboem]

I like this thread, but I am not yet convinced that I should be reviewing a character out of the context of the story. Arthur Dent was a perfect protagonist for The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, but he would have been a terrible protagonist for Game of Thrones.

[Im_moron]

oh, good point :Y
probably wise to put some context then

[Im_moron]

boom...

Context/role in the world (who are they in the world per se)

and "Motivation"

which I was a baka to forget to include!

how can you have a protagonist without a motivation?

[kklekc718]

She is more so based on Pecos Bill from the tall tales of the wild west. (Freakin’ rode on a tornado).
I guess some flaws she has is partly her body weight. As you can see, she is EXTRA THICC! Joke aside, she can feel somewhat uncomfortable being surrounded by slimmer women. She doesn’t want to change her body much because she was raised in a community of bigger women, including her adoptive mother. She felt inspired by their motherly nature at a young age, so she wanted to be like them.
Another flaws of her character is that she has little knowledge of other culture, as she was homeschooled in a Christian environment (homeschooled myself). Her intended act of kind gesture may accidentally appear to be an insult to another. She will also face lesbian characters, which would shock her (and honestly, that would be fun to write).
She is also very attached to her Mexican family, which would bring up an interesting arc.
And now, finally, power flaws. Unlike Superman, who learn of his powers, Jill never knew what she was capable of, until the end of the series (where she meet the characters of her past).
She is not virtually bulletproof, though she has a rather good reaction time.
In some case, she lacks control, as she tends to have a “shoot first, think later” type of mindset. In a case where she could have done it one way, she overkilled by doing another (a giant landslide comes to town, she creates a bigger wall by stomping to the ground. Town is saved, but everybody is trapped).

[FatedComics]

Quote:"First you want me to talk to people then you don't...I'll be fine, it'll be fine, everything will be fine!"
name:Alexis Huoyàn
summary:Alexis is a hot-headed witch with a fiery personality...and the ability to make fire appear in her hands, but it turns out she's not so good at that so she's going to Erika Academy, a magical school, to help hone her skills, at this new school she makes many new friends and uncovers a dark secret about the school.
personalityshe's very stubborn and shy, she doesn't like meeting new people all that much but she pushes herself to do it. It's heavily implied so far that her mother has died and because of that, she's separated herself from the world to try and avoid heartbreak like that again.
role in the story:so far in the story she is basically your average high school girl, she isn't anything special, she's just a little below average when it comes to magic.
Motivation:she wants to learn to be powerful when it comes to magic. Her mother was a powerful witch and she wants to be just like her mother.
scenario:first day of school and Alexis knocks someone over, instead of helping them up she'd panic and run away whilst apologising rapidly. Another scenario, she is bombarded by monsters when on a training exercise in the forest, Alexis would try her hardest to summon up any bit of magic to defeat it but in the end, would have to be rescued.
This is just how the character is portrayed so far, I've only just started the comic and there will be more development with this character as I get into the series. If you're interested in checking my series out here's a link

Set Ablaze :: page one | Tapas