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Improving art isn’t as simple as “just making it better”, but your style seems to be doubting itself. The lines and colors are cartoony while the proportions seem to be aiming for realism. This can be a fine stylization, but it seems like it isn’t being done on purpose. That’s just nitpicking though. One way to help improve is to focus more on shaped than lines
How do I make the colors less cartoony? I'm definitely not going for a "cartoon" style. Though I wouldn't describe what I'm making as realism either, more comic style.
How to make your art better?
Have you tried making things different? Think about the parts that you dislike about your art, then proceed to think, is the method what is annoying you? Is the result? Can you do something different if the current shape is not of your liking?
Try experimenting even if you have those feelings of "I don't want to fail" / "I don't want to make something I don't like", there is no one pointing a gun at you therefore, you can make mistakes, you can redraw as many times it takes you until you're satisfied.
Have you tried checking out the internet? Different videos, tutorials, classes, different artists from all around the globe sharing their methods and even with different teaching techniques or procedures. So in case you can't understand someone or their ways are not comfortable to you, you can always check someone else. Those who don't search won't find, it's a matter of typing, watching, trying, theorizing, coming up with conclussions, repeat. And even, sometimes there won't be answers ready to satisfy you, or to explain to you how to do things exactly so you are satisfied with your results, sometimes there is not even an answer and the only solution for you, it would be do things differently than you're used to, even if you don't know how.
You won't become better in a matter of weeks, or months, or even years. Everyone learns at a different speed and not everyone can use the same method, so there is no need to struggle nor get anxious as if there is a time limit. But you can be analytical, you can judge your work and you're the one who should know what to fix based on the things that you dislike in order to like them, what is that you hate about your art and then try to change it, but in order to do so you need to leave your comfort zone and do things differently.
As well, don't compare yourself to others, if you compare yourself to others then ask yourself what is that that you like about other people's artwork that make you hate yours. Try to replicate, try to study the art, try to watch if possible how others do things so you can have an idea and try to incorporate things to your practice, see what elements can you incorporate, or what elements you discover you can do in more ways than just one.
I cannot give you exact paths or answers, as I'm the kind of artist that back when started and asked more experienced artists, the only reply I got was: "Keep practicing" (just that, not even half of what I typed here lol)
Then that's when it clicked to me "What should I practice?", but I didn't receive answers, therefore, I had to come up with them on my own, I had to become critical of my own work and carve my way up
The thing is I can't really think of things that are overly wrong about it, but when I look at other peoples art I realize what I'm drawing is noticeably worse than that.
Can you link to an artist that you really love - the person whose art style you want to have? It would be easier to give pointers knowing what you're going for.
Also, I'd highly recommend doing studies of the professional art you like and think is great. It's easier to understand what's going on when you try to replicate it rather than just looking!
That’s darker, desaturated is closer to gray than closer to black if that makes sense.
The line in the middle shows what saturation means. I’m not trying to imply you need to make all your colors muddy and gray, but making most of them a bit more desaturated except for small areas you want to really pop will definitely help achieve art that is a little easier on the eyes (sometimes you do want bright colors though, I don’t know when these times are as they depend on you, though)
You say that by comparing yourself your work is "noticeably worse" and yet you cannot point out one single thing about what it is what you dislike about it? Have you tried then asking what are the things that you like about other people's work? Why you consider them "noticeably better"?
If you cannot make a good use to comparison nor make it a tool for your own benefit, then you'll need to stop comparing yourself to others since it's only autosabotage and just a way to discourage yourself and making you hate your work and current abilities more.
The internet is vast, whatever you wanna learn to later incorporate in your work is there, coloring technique, color theory, lightning and shadows, textures, prespective, depth, anatomy, different styles, even drawing in traditional instead of digital or mixing both techniques, or even more methods, etc.
Creativity is not only having ideas about what to draw, but as well the innovation of solving problems, but you won't be able to use creativity if you don't nurture yourself, Creativity requires knowledge, learning and studying so you can later apply it to anything you're struggling with and as well, creativity strikes when you're already working, instead of hoping that others gives you concrete answers to questions that you can't even give a proper shape (And even if you did, there aren't always answers that are 2+2=4).
Going to say you are at the basics of art. You need to learn gesture drawing, the form of the human body, take a life drawing class, practice a lot, and then worry about a style or look for a comic. Your journey is just starting, don't put the cart in front of the horse.
I actually found the saturation setting on my drawing app and turned the saturation down, and that's how I got the colors I did. Like I turned this setting all the way down and it turned a solid grey color. Turning it darker doesn't actually make the colors less vibrant in my opinion, and instead he looks like he has the same colors on his body, but in a darker room.
Then practice, educate yourself, investigate those aspects and figure out how to make your art look better. As well, incorporate all the things you're learning, even the ones you dislike, realism, shapes, inanimate objects are important as well.
I am not sure what to say about your style because I am not sure what direction you want to go in. The first one looks like Doug
Which has a more cartoony and “rubber hose” look.
Cartoon, anime, realism, etc. whatever style you are going for, it doesn’t hurt to study anatomy and do gesture drawings. There is a saying “you have to know the rules before you break them”.
I would also recommend just experimenting with a bunch of different styles. Good practice is drawing your characters in other people’s style. It will help you see the little details that goes into someone’s style and sort of makes you look at things from a different perspective.
I also would recommend pushing yourself out of your comfort zone. This does go hand in hand with experimenting but I am also asking you to draw things like hands and shoes and other things like that. The only way I got better at drawing hands was forcing myself to draw them.
That is called still life. That is the start of fundamentals. You will learn pressure control, perspective, lighting, and arm/wrist movement. That's where you start. You can't just go straight to more advance art not having a foundation or you will just learn mistakes and reinforce them by repeating them. Patience. No one learned to draw well in a year or two, it takes decades.
Life drawing can sound lame and boring at first, but what you're doing is learning to see the subject and recognize details and apply them to a drawing. These are super important skills as a good basis for drawing. You will be able to apply this skill to figure drawing, coloring, gestures, lighting, etc, all sorts of things as you level up as an artist. The more you do stuff like this, you'll see vast improvements in your art. Like many other people said, it takes a lifetime of learning and nonstop practice. Even professionals at the top of their craft still practice life drawing to keep their basic skills sharp. You can't build a solid house on an unstable base.
I am aware of what a still life is. But the way the class assigns them I don't think they're very helpful. I don't feel any better at drawing than I was at the start of the class, and drawing the negative space of a chair felt like a waste of time to be since it wasn't connected to anything else. I don't feel like the still life's made me any better at shading and value than I was before drawing them either, and even if they did I mostly draw digital art.
The point of negative space drawings are forcing your brain to look at things from a different perspective. Most beginners tend to just see and draw things as outlines but struggle when it comes to making those outlines look right. Negetive space has you look at shapes and the shapes within forms.
Like if you struggle with hands, knowing negative space can help with this. Instead of seeing it as this complex thing, you are seeing it simply as a shape.
That's because the teacher is trying to train your brain to observe the world and see how objects are placed in a space. It also helps you learn about composition lines which can help with observation. If you start doing complex shading to a drawing with bad composition, it's not going to look right.