Hey Spicy, how extensive of a critique are you wanting? My project has never had a proofreader, and it certainly needs such treatment. I advise writers all the time to not be their own editors for the purpose of correcting grammar, spelling, and typo mistakes, but I break my own rule for lack of any better options. We could give each others books the full treatment. I would be available for that the Tapas Novel Camp event (which should begin tonight and end April 19th).