I just finnish my first chapter! I'll love some reviews

[lifeincolorful]

Hello everybody!

After a lot of struggles I finally finnished the first chapter of my comic!

This project is kind of hard to be the first but I've been working in this stories for a few year now!

So, "Six degrees of separation" have multiples stories (arcs) about differents relationships, love, friendship, dreams and adulthood in general. There are 6 main character witch lifes are twine with the other five in one way or another.

This first one is about a girl with a failed relationship trying to move on.

Six degrees of separation | Tapas

I would like you to give me a little review! I know there are a lot of thing to improve, and I will like to know what is good and what can get better.

Thank you for taking the time to read it and I hope you like it

[elyss]

Just finished it, it was a fun read! I'm subbed and looking forward to more~

I do have a question though. Is his name Sean or John? Eddie mentioned in the beginning that John left but then in the phone call it said Sean. Are they two different people?

[lifeincolorful]

@elyss I'm really glad you like it!

And for the question yes! His name is Sean...at the begging was "John" and I forgot to remove it from the script, since I copy-paste that part it end up like that.

I change it already, so thank you so much!

[themerrytroll]

Sounds interesting. I will find some time to take a look at your comic.

[ocnony]

I like how you pace the story. Not a fan of cheaters, but that's where all the drama lays, right?
It's nice!

[lifeincolorful]

@themerrytroll Thank you for taking the time

@ocnony Oh the drama! Thank you very much! for reading it!

[themerrytroll]

No problem. You are welcome!