Since no one gave you a review, I’ll try my best at it. Looking at your artwork, it’s ok. One can tell you are still an armature in the art department and what better way to improve than continuing to draw. Keep in mind, when you are drawing, use references. I understand some references are hard to find like background however anatomy references aren’t as scarce. Use that when creating scenes with your characters.
Secondly, your story line is completely off. I mean, i think i get the concept but I wan’t drawn in. this may be due to your inexperience in telling stories. I can’t even tell you what it’s about because it came off to me as random dialogue floating around. I believe you attempted to explain the story from the main character’s point of view, but to be honest. I wasn’t following. You should consider checking other artist who have done this to understand exactly how to approach it. Use my work, for example. Since I Met You
Also while reading, i noticed you do have good support from your audience. they seem to engage in your work, and that’s a good thing. You said you are worried about how they view your work but i didn’t see any negative comments. From time to time readers won’t leave a comment and that’s normal. it could be because they don’t know what to say but it does not mean they don’t like it.
I’m not sure what type of audience you are hoping to get or how many subs you are hoping to gain but let me be honest with you it’s difficult to build an audience and therefore requires time. it wont grow over night and patience is required.