Self-Explanatory title, really. I'll give all the positives and areas of improvements of the first few chapters. Please understand that anything negative doesn't mean the novel or comic is bad, only that it can be improved.
If you try anything agressive, I will send my cat after you. He isn't actually a cat, but something from deep within the empty wastes of space. Do not have him show his real form, you'll wear a diaper the rest of your life.
Anyway, bring it on (Check my webnovel if you want, since I must have a Shameless Plug somewhere somewhere)!
