Ok, I'm going to give feedback here instead of giving a comment as I normally do. The art is very unique and the idea is fun, but it might be me, but none of the jokes landed for me. Comedy is VERY subjective and very far from what I know on how to give advice on improving it. Try having more people read it, like family and friends, and ask if they found it funny. Go for the widest range of people you can, cause at least for me, it didn't work hahahahaha.
Hope that helped you regardless and thanks for asking for feedback.
