You have a healthy and vivid imagination. I can tell that from reading your first episode. I'm guessing that even though your main characters are from the race of dragons. Judging from the art of your book, the characters themselves are still humanoid in form?
Regardless, the setting and world-building you provided is evocative and engaging. Though I don't really know how to imagine the Jade Construct that keeps getting brought up. Is it a structure, a weapon?
Your two main characters convey their personalities well making use of their reactions and their sibling-esque relationship (I know they're cousins) is very relatable. Especially since I have siblings myself.
The plot starts to thicken quite nicely in the latter half of your first episode. I like how ominous it felt when the potential antagonists were introduced.
Your story may get a bit hard to follow especially when confronted with the fantasy terminology used throughout your story. It gets pretty rough when my assumptions and the story begins to clash with one another.
An example of when this happens in your story is when you mentioned the male lead's scales being exposed to the winds. When I read this detail at first, I had no idea that they were dragon-like beings. So, I was temporarily in a state of confusion.
To absolve this, I'd advise mentioning the important details first before making any references to those referring back to those details.
For example, you should mention that the characters are dragon-like beings before talking about their scales.
Lastly, I might be a bit biased regarding this, but I felt like the episode might be a bit too long. Especially since Tapas scale of story should be a bit more bite-sized than average. I like to think of the first episode as being like an appetizer for your meal.
Overall Opinions:
+ Great World-building
+ Characters are given personality and a unique appearance
+ Easy to digest paragraphs
-- Using fantastical terminology without much explanation to what it is may be a bit hit/miss
-- Appearance of important details can be organized a bit better
-- Just a little too long
Other thoughts:
If possible, I would love to talk to you some more about how your story is built. And your insight about the power system that you are using for your story.
Specifically, I'd like to ask you about how you perceive pathokenesis, as it is a similar power to one of the main powers in my story.
That being said, I wish you the best of luck with your creative journey, and I hope my advise may help you in the future.
I hope that we may speak again. Thank you for participating.