I will review the First Two Chapters of your series [Closed!]

ratscout 2020-09-04 21:17:55 UTC #22

I really appreciate you doing this. Thank you. I will read the first two chapters of yours tonight!

Please PM me or comment on this thread with the critique, though. Don't leave it on the story.

DWaM22 2020-09-04 21:20:07 UTC #23

Okay, by my count, that should be eight! Thanks for submitting, I will get back to you all sometime over the weekend!

Wocalich 2020-09-04 21:22:27 UTC #24

I would suggest you edit the title, people might keep submitting if you don't

jensrichard77 2020-09-06 18:00:39 UTC #25

Thank you for doing this. You are helping the community more than you might think

DWaM22 2020-09-06 18:59:53 UTC #26

Phew, okay. I am currently 6 for 8. Should get Melodies and Inheritance done tomorrow. When I do, I'll start accepting requests for reviews again.

As always, I hope the reviews I've sent so far have been helpful!

DWaM22 2020-09-07 21:16:47 UTC #27

And that should be all eight!

With that, I once again open the requests for stories! Eight slots are open, conditions are the same as they've always been. Since it's only the beginning of the week and I've got work, applicants should expect the reviews by the end of the week at the absolute latest.

I hope the feedback has been helpful so far!

DWaM22 2020-09-07 21:19:04 UTC #29

I reviewed your first two chapters, though... ^^" It should be in the comments of your story.

KJBatson 2020-09-07 21:24:38 UTC #30

oh shit. I apologize. threads are bleeding together in my head. sorry ignore me.

DWaM22 2020-09-07 21:26:27 UTC #31

All good, no worries.

spelunkadunk 2020-09-07 23:54:38 UTC #32

If you are still open, I'd love for you to review the first two chapters of my story!

It is BL and rated mature (though there is nothing explicit in the first chapters), so if that's not up your alley, feel free to ignore this.

WillowTree 2020-09-08 00:44:24 UTC #33

You should consider doing a review novel. I've seen a couple people who have them and you give really, really good feedback. I think it'd go over really well!

Geek_Aflame 2020-09-08 00:48:37 UTC #34

I saw that you reopened 3hrs ago. I really like the sound of your story based on the description and can't wait to read it.

Here is my story if you're open to reviewing it, it's a Paranormal Fantasy/Mystery series. I've edited the chapters since someone last reviewed it and I'd like some new feedback.

thecrystalrook 2020-09-08 00:51:43 UTC #35

Here you go! Have at it, I'll have a look at yours!

ItsAvocadoToast 2020-09-08 00:53:28 UTC #36

Heres my series: Comedy, called Avocados And Toast

DWaM22 2020-09-08 09:34:13 UTC #37

I appreciate the suggestion! However, most of my longer reviews are generally structured as notes and point to specific issues I found within the story, along with some general comments. They're not really going to have much of an importance or interest for anyone but the creator, I don't think.

And, if the creator does make major changes, and I don't go back and change the public review to reflect them, it could reflect poorly on their story if people who come across my review novel, assuming the issues are still there, don't give it a fair shake.

Anyhow, four slots filled!

DWaM22 2020-09-09 16:17:48 UTC #38

Quick bump.

I'll probably close this soon -- in about a day -- even if not all slots are filled to make sure I can start working on the reviews.

mikeampao1 2020-09-09 16:45:05 UTC #39

Did i make it? Here is my comic and i don't mind if you wanted to read the rest of chapters without needed to review (Must read Chapter 4 for revelation), Thanks for your effort

MegaRay 2020-09-09 16:58:56 UTC #40

My comic is still very early, so I don't know if there's enough material for a review, but I would appreciate any criticism or notes.

lunagraves714 2020-09-09 18:26:32 UTC #41

Hey I was just wondering if you could give me your initial thoughts on my first two chapters. I’m going to read yours right now

Fuzed 2020-09-09 18:38:00 UTC #42

Not sure if the slots are filled yet, but I'd be happy to hear your opinion on the series.

Have a great day!

PS: I just opened your novel and gonna give the first few chapters a read. If I enjoy it, I'll definitely sub.