If you have a funny comic post it here and i'll give you my brutally honest opinion

[teoferrazzi]

@Maffi is this supposed to be funny? where's the joke?

[L4213]

yep~ my jokes are pretty safe-ish i dunno i try to keep it relatable. i should try exploring different types of humor tho~

[Maffi]

Did you read the next two parts? Because i had to split that page into 3 due to the fact it was to big for tapastic.

[hannahmcgill]

RAWR! Dinosaur Friends

Shouldn't take you too long, linked episode only has two words.

[teoferrazzi]

you should have just uploaded multiple files on the same episode..
disqualified.

[teoferrazzi]

it's a pun. you know. the lowest form of humor. but it's well executed I guess.

[8289542f]

i've seen way too many comic makers make jokes about how they procrastinate.and they're usually done better than this. also what's this about saying yours are the 'best comics ever'?even jokingly, that's not a very good attitude to have. the only people who claim theirs is the 'best comic ever' aren't usually very good.

Taking anything written in a comedy strip seriously. Hah.

Anyway, Maddox made a fucking fortune presenting unfunny tripe with a rockstar attitude.

[8289542f]

I thought I was the only person who described puns as the lowest form of humour.

[teoferrazzi]

it's literally what they are.

[TristanJensen]

this is my most recent one...
http://tapastic.com/episode/155508

and one with a pun...
http://tapastic.com/episode/149439

[teoferrazzi]

another comic about procrastinating/making comic?
why does every comic maker feel the need to use this tired subject? and without even trying to do something different about it? I'm tired of seeing it. stop doing it. if you can't think of a better topic then take a breath of fresh air, go outside. do something else.

[TristanJensen]

You have a good point there. I'll focus on being more original.
Then I'll focus on getting people to stop the "somebody is waving at someone else but you think they're waving at you and you wave back and embarrass yourself" joke
that one just irks me for some reason...

[teoferrazzi]

just to be clear, i don't think any topic is off limits really. so long as you put a creative twist on it.

and this is probably not good advice in order to be successful. the biggest comic makers on tapastic have all done some bland, hacky material. it's my personal taste i'm talking about here.

[hannahmcgill]

Here's one that doesn't have a pun.

[teoferrazzi]

you only get one review.

[bedmoss]

I'd love to hear some feedback! I've never really stuck to making regular gag comics and my series is my first taking a stab at it.

This is my latest strip!
bear x kitty komiks : KITTY HAD ME DEAD

[teoferrazzi]

the humor is corny, the overacting faces add nothing to the joke, and neither does the animation. it feels like a lot of artistic effort went into a script that didn't warrant it.

[bedmoss]

Hmmm, I'll work on my jokes!
I do find that they're the most difficult for me.
Thank you for the feedback! ( > v < )

[ueae6e82a0c88426]

http://tapastic.com/episode/156094

[teoferrazzi]

the 'shower thoughts' worthy question is all right, the pacing is slightly ruined by the response at the end.
but it's an ok comic.