If you have a funny comic post it here and i'll give you my brutally honest opinion

[TristanJensen]

this is my most recent one...
http://tapastic.com/episode/155508

and one with a pun...
http://tapastic.com/episode/149439

[teoferrazzi]

another comic about procrastinating/making comic?
why does every comic maker feel the need to use this tired subject? and without even trying to do something different about it? I'm tired of seeing it. stop doing it. if you can't think of a better topic then take a breath of fresh air, go outside. do something else.

[TristanJensen]

You have a good point there. I'll focus on being more original.
Then I'll focus on getting people to stop the "somebody is waving at someone else but you think they're waving at you and you wave back and embarrass yourself" joke
that one just irks me for some reason...

[teoferrazzi]

just to be clear, i don't think any topic is off limits really. so long as you put a creative twist on it.

and this is probably not good advice in order to be successful. the biggest comic makers on tapastic have all done some bland, hacky material. it's my personal taste i'm talking about here.

[hannahmcgill]

Here's one that doesn't have a pun.

[teoferrazzi]

you only get one review.

[bedmoss]

I'd love to hear some feedback! I've never really stuck to making regular gag comics and my series is my first taking a stab at it.

This is my latest strip!
bear x kitty komiks : KITTY HAD ME DEAD

[teoferrazzi]

the humor is corny, the overacting faces add nothing to the joke, and neither does the animation. it feels like a lot of artistic effort went into a script that didn't warrant it.

[bedmoss]

Hmmm, I'll work on my jokes!
I do find that they're the most difficult for me.
Thank you for the feedback! ( > v < )

[ueae6e82a0c88426]

http://tapastic.com/episode/156094

[teoferrazzi]

the 'shower thoughts' worthy question is all right, the pacing is slightly ruined by the response at the end.
but it's an ok comic.

[CPY]

thx for the feedback ... I'm glad you do find it funny
I'll make sure to improve on those areas you mentioned - facial expression and language.
tho language really isn't my forte.

[Merryweatherey]

Let's give this a try.

Doctor Evercross

[teoferrazzi]

this is not humor. it's soft core porn disguised as humor. you do what you can to get an audience, I respect that.. but there isn't a joke for me to criticize.

[jedi34567]

How about this episode of Adventures of Ty?

http://tapastic.com/episode/155463

[teoferrazzi]

the tone of the humor is all right, but i think you may have ruined it a bit by wanting to cram as many jokes as possible within the four panels. i suggest focusing on one, funny punchline instead

[teoferrazzi]

i understood the joke, but based on the way you draw your characters we both know it wasn't the focus of your comic.
you only get one review, as ive mentioned on this thread.

[Merryweatherey]

Oh. Alright. Well it was fun.

And actually I am just a script writer, I can't draw. ^^

[Merryweatherey]

Alright, I can't keep my mouth shut, and I'm awfully sorry for disrupting the thread, but saying "This is not humor, it's soft core porn disguised as humor," is incredibly unfair. Just because the artist drew the character in fanservice-y way, which is very typical for Manga, doesn't mean the humour isn't there.

If it's just your opinion, I can respect it, but there's undoubtedly a joke there, and the character design being slightly fanservicey doesn't change that.

[Drone]

Go on then Drone&Amoeba - Star Wars Name