I'll read and review your first chapter!

[SleepyHaku]

I would gladly hear some feedback about my manga too.

Vampyre | Tapas

[anandaglass]

So this was very easy to read, which is a good thing! The scene flowed and everything made sense. I like how you gave exposition in a way that still affected the current events (the mom saying arent we family?). This is a bit of a nitpick but make sure your text is properly centered in the bubbles. This took me out of the story a few times. This could also be a style thing but I would have like the outlines of the people to be a little more pronounced. Now it doesnt have to be lineart or anything but just a bit heavier so I can clearly differentiate between the objects on the page since there is no color. Great work though- seems really interesting!

[plot_line]

Thank so much, I really appreciate the constructive criticism, it can be really hard to find!

[anandaglass]

Wowza - I really enjoyed reading that. The art direction is really good and everything is super clear. The genre you wrote in is definitely not one I like to read and yet the quality of your manga made sure I wasn't turned off. If anything my biggest criticism would be the details for your comic. Make sure you fill that out! You've put too much effort for people not to click because they don't know what it is about.

Also this is not a huge deal but on the first page right after you scare us about the blood mages, you mention Dion likes to help people. I personally would have left that out because it lets the reader think well... we just learned how scary blood mages are and then wonder if Dion is good or bad. Of course you could be subverting that expectation but I think it would be cool to let the reader figure that out on their own. Anywhoo, really really good work!

[LakeLake]

Thank you for looking over it. It's a relief to hear that the scene made sense, since that was a big concern for me. It's been half a year since I put this chapter together and I must have missed the off centered text when double checking it before posting (although having the fact pointed out helped me notice that some of them are definitely off a bit ). The art for the project is all done, but line weight is definitely something I'll try to keep in mind should I make another project in a similar style. Again, thank you for taking your time and giving feedback! It's greatly appreciated.

[SleepyHaku]

Wow, thank you so much for your feedback!
Yeah, you're right. I should write something into my details, but I haven't done so yet since I always feel like the synopsis I come up with gives to much away. Although I think I've got something in mind now, which doesn't spoil anything.

Hmm, interesting suggestion. Actually, I really like that idea.
Thank you for pointing that out I will consider changing it.

Also, thank you for subscribing I really appreciate it!

[Bree_Mana]

Thanks for the review! Character design is honestly my jam so I'm glad you like them! Chapter 2 is when a bulk of the characters get revealed and I had fun trying to make a cast of unique characters. And yes I'm aware of the spelling errors I've been trying to avoid those more closely as of late.

If you'd like to continue reading go ahead, if not thats cool too but again thanks for taking the time to check out my work!

[sarahmassey998]

Sure, why not.

Prometheus Reanimated | Tapas

[faisalhussein394]

Thanks, I'll keep that in mind.

[Zak]

Do it. I dare you.

JETX | Tapas

[SagaHolmgaard]

First chapter is 18 pages so not that long ^^ I'm always looking for reviews and feedback tho! Wanna make the best comic I can

Reclaim | Tapas

[anandaglass]

Oo I really loved that! The pages flew by and I was like wait that was 18 pages already?! So it was really nice that ur pages really moved with the story and wasnt choppy or anything. Your story is definitely in the genre I like to read so I am already into it hahah.

One suggestion I have would be to change the script font you use. It is definitely adds to the feel but it's hard to read at times when its a huge block of text. Maybe if you use it find creative ways to split of the text somehow so its a bit more readable?

Other than that I really enjoyed it and like the dynamic between the two main characters. Great work

[Shadymeadows]

My first chapter isn't very naughty yet if you would consider checking it out!

Shadymeadows - A Vampire's Fantasy | Tapas

[SagaHolmgaard]

Ayyy I'm glad you liked it!
Agreed about the text bubbles, some of them have too much text in a single bubble. Breaking up the speech bubbles is a good idea, or looking for a different font
Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to give some feedback, I appreciate it!

[surenlicious]

Oooooh, can I still try and leave my novel here?

Jade Kingdoms | Tapas

[Bowbears]

Please give it a shot! Its about the last highschool basketball game they will face and for the first time in 40 years they have entered the semi finals!

Love Shot

[madocallie]

Seven Miles Down (B)

My webtoon is about a young oceanographer travelling down the deepest trench in the world. Any thoughts are highly appreciated!

[Soptatoes]

I try to do really bad comedy enough so it won't be called comedy

Potato Two :: Tomato Please? | Tapas

[disqette]

aw heck hope I'm not too late qq

Retribution Law

[ExA]

please critique my comic​

XPDC:CORONA | Tapas