@Darth_Biomech - Leaving the cradle
I've already checked your comic on my own a while ago while browsing the category I'm writing in. So I'm going to leave you a very disappointing overview instead.
There's not much I can tell on the surface except that you like Mordin. And the Citadel. A lot. Your format doesn't fit the tapas and webtoon requirement but I consider that a good thing. Something you realized, since it looks like you put down the effort for your site.
You also tend to improve as you go in categories other than art.
What strikes me is that you rely on your knowledge of other media a lot. I don't mean references. I mean execution, layout, interior design and story beats. And for someone just as knowledgeable will come off as cliché.
Intro quotes from a dead person are overplayed.
You need to shill your comic more, especially since it already has a lot of content.
And I strongly disagree. I love space babes!
I always pick Miranda. Always!