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Aug 2020

Maybe you can give this a look over and see what you think.

The dialogue is natural, the characters are relatable, your blurb nicely summarizes the series, and I like the pacing

Thanks. Though I have been thinking of reworking the series a little bit.

I'm almost reaching the milestone XD

Your artstyle doesn't use normal lines, which is something I like seeing. Another comic that doesn't use normal lines is "Safely Endangered." Also, your comic is relatable. And I like your title. Alliteration in titles is really nice in my opinion.

It's always good to hear nice comments ^^ I'll leave my comic here :smile:

I like the absence of color. This seems to me to not be a particularly happy environment, so the absence of color is a nice touch. Also, your comic's blurb mentions some famous history, which caught my attention.

I like the bland colors. It helps the comic show that the main character is in a bad place right now. Also, the lines are neat. And the story seems pretty cool. I'm going to rate you a ten because why not.

Congrats and thanks

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if you're still open in replying! here's mine hehe

It's easily binge-able; the comics are short and there are a lot of them. And it lives up to the blurb. Plus, it's traditionally drawn which is something refreshing.

Hello!!! You don’t need to reply on mine if u still feel uncomfortable but just wanted to take part

Your art looks very good, you give us a sense of where the character are, the dialogue seems pretty natural, and "Sarimanok" is a cool name.

You start off with something pretty innocent, but then you go straight into murder which is offsetting and will probably get readers hooked. Unless they're like me and feel uncomfortable watching people die. Also, your art is really good and that helps out with the offsetting thing.

Congrats about the 50 subs! Good news for you!

As for me, I have my comic here, fantasy/drama :https://tapas.io/series/Chronicles-of-Adala

WARNING: there is explicit violence at the beginning. Discretion is advised.

Another thing: After reading my comic, are there any comics of this kind you have in mind for me to read?

Thank you.