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give me a story in a script format and ill draw a page

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Script format...not sure how that would be but:

Elderly kind looking man walks past a beautiful pasture, only to be robbed violently in the next panel with polluted cityscape. The pasture was just a graffiti.

(Any good?)

script format would be like this
Snow melts off leaves in a snow covered road.

(Jecie kicks the snow)
Jecie:
That's not a good sign, Kyle

Kyle (worried):
Jecie, You mean-

Jecie:
Yes. Look how much water is flowing
Down the river? Winter's end is coming.

Kyle:
And the creatures that has plague humanity will
come out of hibernation

Kyle:
ever wonder what they really are?

Jecie
I think They are a soul less version of us. No one really knows , but Everyone I've met had their own Theories

(flashback in camp)
Man:
God has turn away from the sinners and has released these demons Upon humanity

(flashback in ruined city)
Woman:
It was Some kind of biological weapon that the military was producing and became uncontrollable

(flashback in prairie)
Man in mushroom haircut:
Aliens.
An invasion plan to weaken humanity

Jecie:
It doesn't matter what they are, Surviving is all that matters .

also if it looks like it more than a couple of pages its ok, but dont write a novel.
also it can be funny =)

Here is a funnyish short about how one of my characters magic works, if you have the time.

The proccess of Fate

The green mist of the past, present and future swirls around an old blind maiden, the green foggy magic seeps out of her eyes, hands, mouth and ears.

In the distance an old man grumbles (wealthy)
Old Man: How did you manage to hide this raw energy from my grasp for so long?
old man laughs with a crazed fire in his eyes
Old man: No matter, it will NOW BE MINE!!!!!!!!

the old man cackles with glee as the green mist circles up and around him, from the old blind maiden. The green mist forms ancient runes throughthe fog.

Soon after all the energy has been seeped out of her body, the old mans smile dissapates as he realizes that the magic is in fact, not going to him, but instead escaping out an open window of his magestic home. (old woman is dead)

The old man screams in rage as the magic flows out of the house.

(Living room of a 1950-1960s style nuclear family. There's a large giftbox in the center of the room)

Mother: happy birthday Jimmy
Jimmy: Oh boy, I hope it's a transistor radio (thought bubble with transistor radio)

(Jimmy unwraps the box)

(Inside the box is a dog with dogs for feet and dogs for eyes)

Two high school friends are having a conversation:
Blonde boy: (looking sad) I don't know how to say this...
...and I don't want you to take it the wrong way, but...

Black haired girl: (worried, thinking) What's going on?

Blonde boy: I don't think... I can be friends with you anymore.

Black haired girl: (surprised) What? What are you talking about?