I've read the first chapter, but I think it needs some work. There are two things I would suggest for you:
First of all, clarity. You write in first person, and that can be a rather confusing perspective if you don't clear up exactly where this person is, and what is going on. Detail is key here I feel. I also think the interactions can be streamlined a bit better. For example the conversations don't quite seem natural, really try to think how you talk to people, and how your friends talk to you, and try to make your speech follow that. Just in general it feels like it is missing directness.
Secondly, if you write in first person, you really need to get in the head of your character. Your readers need to see what your character sees, and you can't exposition things away like you can in third person. You will always, consistently have to see the world through the eyes of your character. First person is an interesting perspective, but I'd always recommend third person if you are telling a story, first person is only for if you are either telling a character, or a character's circumstances. War stories, autobiographies of people with strange lives, and showcasing societies in turmoil and upheaval really benefit from a first person perspective to ground it - fictional work generally just doesn't need it.
Of course it can be fun to experiment with though, but if you are going to, know that it's also going to bind your hands in ways.
