Hey, so I'm wondering if my story description is actually good or not. It's something of a big point of insecurity for me, and I couldn't help but notice that there are plenty of other stories that haven't been around for nearly as long as mine but have way, way better analytics overall.
The description, in the interest of not being a scumbag:

"Death set me free, but then it rejected me like a high school crush way out of my league."

A swordmaster flees from her hometown and to the illustrious city of Halych, leaving behind a history of sorrow and pain to find better people and claim a better future for herself. There's a problem: She won't find it here. Something in Halych is turning people into monsters, amplifying their worst elements and driving them to do terrible things, and the worst part is that it's nothing new to Halych. As June works within a secretive swordsmanship school known as the Haracrein, she will be brought by degrees to fight the corruption in Halych's underbelly, and eventually she'll be forced to make decisions that make her question her deepest convictions.

How much of her humanity will she lose in the process?

This story will contain frequent displays of graphic violence, harsh language, and touches on topics of moral ambiguity and the usage of hard drugs. Viewer discretion is advised.

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"Death set me free, but then it rejected me like a high school crush way out of my league."

I like this quote, but the rest of the summary doesn't seem to fit with it's modern, YA feel. The quote is voicey, while the summary isn't. I suggest to inject the summary with voice to match the quote.

A swordmaster flees from her hometown and to the illustrious city of Halych, leaving behind a history of sorrow and pain to find better people and claim a better future for herself.

I suggest unloading this sentence a little, because it is a bit on the long side: June, a swordmaster, flees her past to find a better life in the big city.

There's a problem: She won't find it here.

I would suggest eliminating it. It takes up text and tells me the forgone conclusion, while the next part actually gives details and lets the make up my own goddamn mind.

Something in Halych is turning people into monsters, amplifying their worst elements and driving them to do terrible things, and the worst part is that it's nothing new to Halych.

I would suggest simplifying this thought a bit: As exciting as Halych is at the first glance, it has a dark secret. It turns its citizens into monsters acting out their most terrible desires.

As June works within a secretive swordsmanship school known as the Haracrein, she will be brought by degrees to fight the corruption in Halych's underbelly, and eventually she'll be forced to make decisions that make her question her deepest convictions.

How much of her humanity will she lose in the process?

I suggest staying with the present tense, even if you haven't written that part of the book yet. It's what the book is about. So, present tense. Plus, you are the writer, so I suggest not asking me about your book, but recast it as stakes instead:

Driven by the desire to purge the city's underbelly, June joins the fight on the side of the secret order of the blade saints. But when the struggle against corruption erodes her convictions, she wonders if the victory would demand the ultimate sacrifce: her humanity.