I enjoyed my overall experience with this comic, it had a simple concept yet it embraced that to tell a meaningful story. The art was okay, the dark pen aesthetic made it look like it was drawn with a ball point pen while a child was in school. The gifs you had was a nice splash of personality put into your comic.
Although some thing you work on is using perspective to build your scenes. When the girl was first introduced she was clearly too big for the door, even if you apply perspective to it. It can also help add a sense of depth to your shots if you use it. You could also practice a bit on their anatomy, some shots their heads were too big considering they are teenagers. You could use Youtube to practice though things. Well, I struggled with this problem until a teacher in college pointed out my anatomy was off.
Anyways, I was wondering if you wanted could take a look at my short story "My Hollow Heart."