The Skyman
Ok, I'm gonna go straight to the point: the narration is a crutch. At no point at all has anything the narrator ever said (in either the per-page recaps or the per-panel commentary in the first few pages) been any useful, nor entertaining. I do understand that it's part of reconstructing the newspaper strip feel and in itself it's a fun concept that you could possibly integrate in an interesting way, so as to both homage but simultaneously make something new and entertaining. But the way it is now it's just a lot of text explaining what I can already clearly see in comic form. I skipped most of it and read only the comic, which I enjoyed. It's action packed and uncomplicated, and intriguing definitely. Depends a lot on where you're going next with the plot. I don't understand why Ansom is wasting all this time hiding all that has happened to him however, and you've wasted quite a few pages running in circles because of this unexplained choice... why shouldn't he have already told Cissy he's more or less becoming a superhero? She's clearly more competent and interested in the thing than he is and she has already figured it out anyway - it just feels more cruel than plain stupid on his part. I'll wait to see if this pays off however, you might be planning more shenaningans.
This thing of having similar designs for all characters (and most of the props even) is tough. If everything is a circle then you lose shape language as a communication channel and you need to work twice as hard to let characterisation and action shine through in what's left. I think you're doing a great job anyway. The line style specifically is a very odd choice. These mechanically perfect vector lines don't service the strip comic aesthetic well imho, and do detract a bit from the energy and feel of the comic. With the vector lineart, the gradient colours, the transparency and your use of fonts I'm much more reminded of early 2000s webcomics than print strip comics. It does tickle my nostalgia bone but again it demands twice as much work from you because you need to breathe life and spontaneity into a cold vector line. You are doing good here too, but I'm left wondering why you went in this direction.
I feel like this really wants to be a fun, simple, straight to the point strip, but there's some unnecessary structure that's weighing it down. Imo you should let it fly and do its thing. Don't talk over it.