Let me review your webcomic!

[Caelestie]

Hmmmm I am rather bad at self promoting! though I would like to read more surreal fantasy comics I might do that!

yeah I will agree my English isn't great but I got better! also yeah I also agree with the dialogue! also yeah my font choices in the beginning are rather bad I will agree! I am planning to redo more of my first pages so there isn't anymore hand written font!
Well it is good to know you find the synopsis good! I had great difficulty creating a good one! Yes I have problem with giving more information on the situation! I will try to rectify that as much as I can!
thanks!

heheh thanks again! well I do love Celtic! Yup in the beginning I had troubles keeping the proportions! I changed that later on! yeah I made character sheet now!
Thanks again!
again thanks! I am glad my coloring pleases you!
I will keep that in mind when it come to borders!
again thanks!
I will try to get better at making the story clearer! I will try to plug in my comic more! I am not sure how well that is going to go!

[monotone_ink]

Shade is my main comic/manga at the moment, so I'd really like to hear your thoughts.
There's also my 2nd comic (an experimental one), The Little Story of Jean

Be as harsh as you can, because I'm desperate for improvement.

[Kaos_Comics]

Hi there, If you got time please check out Super-Dud
Issue #1 is complete here on Tapastic. Issue #2 is currently been uploaded every Monday. Page 11 of issue 2 has been uploaded today.
Thanks.
I look forward to hearing what you tink

[igneriss]

No problem! Let's do this! looks at comic sees 174 episodes Seeing as this is getting so many responses is it okay if I just review based on the prologue and a few recent pages?

Sure ( : I know it's quite a lot to read~

[AffectedMind]

Nah not really, it gets hardcore later so I will just recommend it when it's still in early stage xD

[mariusthered]

I am coming to the end of season one of Talesfromswipecity so I would be interested in a review if you are up for it. there are no sex scenes but there is some tastefully done female nudity, and some scenes of punishment (none nude). I think you would enjoy the story

[insomniascrawl]

Mine is called Rooftop Bookshop, it's lighthearted and it isn't all too far along, but since your browsing styles I figured I'd speak up

[AffectedMind]

Oh and just for the record the latest cover for chapter 7 is a bit bloody and psychodelic, it have NSFW content so you can just pass it by.

[camillabluejay]

My comic is Kindred Sun! I don't have a lot yet, but if you could tell me the feel you're getting from it so far, and if it seems interesting, I'd appreciate it! I'll do the same for you, if you like :3 That goes for any of you guys, really. I love reviewing stories of any type. <3

[camillabluejay]

Hahaha that's a great reaction gif! PM me if you want, and maybe we could review eachother's when I get off work? I'll look yours over and tell you what I think. What are you looking for? :3

[sbattale]

Sure why not? http://tapastic.com/series/Lost-Nova

[Merryweatherey]

This will be fun! Magnolia Online

[Jrej]

Wow. you do impressive reviews. Lots of details!
When you start this kind of topic you could be overwhelmed with the number of responses.
You might be starting a waiting list real soon...

If you still have space/motivation to have a look at my comic Shades Of Men,
that would be awesome!

Thanks! Good luck!

[kissmylclaw]

My webcomic is this... http://tapastic.com/series/Shartan

I improved the older pages. And Thanks!!.

[vinnception]

My comic is Lucky Hazard, if you wouldn't mind reading it. It's about a lot of things right now. The first part is about a kid and how he meets his adoptive brother. It's high-fantasy and will eventually become full-shonen. I'd appreciate it if you or anyone else gave it a read and gave me some critiques.

[YoungAdventurer]

Sorry, I wasn't able to review based on your whole comic, it looks like a good read and I have bookmarked it to read again later when I have more time. This review is based on the prologue and most of chapter four.

Storytelling:
I was actually quite surprised, I was able to get a general idea of the story and enjoyed reading it, even though I didn't know the characters.

I actually laughed when they found the dragon in that granny's basement. Definitely not a cat lol.

I can actually feel the plot thickening, even though I have no idea what is going on and I do NOT trust that guy with the glasses. He is UP TO SOMETHING.

There are a few grammar errors in the dialogue, they can sometimes be a bit distracting for the reader (e.g. past and present tense mix-ups and incomplete sentences) If you just put your dialogue through some sort of word processing program like Microsoft Word it should pick up on errors like these for you.

The fact that I can still enjoy your story and grow attached to your characters by only reading the first and last bits shows that you have quite a talent for storytelling. Keep up the great work!

Art:
Your art is looking fantastic, I can see a definite improvement from the first few pages!

Your pages are lovely and detailed and I like your use of large black areas. It's obvious how much time and effort you put into your pages and it really shows.

Something seems wrong with Kestrel's design, up close her face doesn't look natural, but you don't seem to have this problem with any other characters. I think maybe her forehead is too small? Her hair is quite thin so that could be why she's the only character with this issue. Just a guess, I could be wrong.

Your character designs are really nice and distinctive so I can easily tell characters apart.

Your art style is nice and neat and I can always tell what is going on.

Your Webcomic as a Whole:
Awesome reader-creator interactions and your comic is a joy to read! I forgot what I usually put here

42 points! And a complete volume of the Hitch-hikers Guide to the Galaxy! (points are irrelevant and completely unrelated to each other but I thought I'd put them here anyway)

[YoungAdventurer]

This review is based from the beginning to Chapter Two page 57.

Ahhhhh! You're melting my heart! Such a cute comic. I really like it so a lot of this is just nit-picking.

Storytelling:
You use correct grammar consistently (There may be a few minor errors that I haven't noticed, honestly I was so caught up in the story that I forgot to check) which when coupled with your gorgeous artwork makes the comic feel very professional.

I like how each character has their own speaking style and choice of language.

At times your storyline can seem slightly wooden. I think you should try to move away from the tried and true methods of story-telling and use things to make your comic original to you. Think of yourself and your everyday life and how you can use the unique aspects of yourself and your lifestyle to make your comic unique.

You have some well-balanced characters but I'm feeling like I need some more flaws in the main characters although since this is the start of the story these flaws may not be apparent until later on.

Art:
Character designs: beautiful
Backgrounds: beautiful
Expressions: beautiful
Screen toning: beautiful

I love your use of broken and decorative borders, they really bring your comic to life.

The only thing I can think of is that the father of the main character looked to young. Seriously that's the only thing.

Your Webcomic as a Whole:
Gorgeous artwork at a professional level, this is something I would pay good money for! Don't be afraid to try and experiment with your characters and story arcs, create something new and original to you. Own it girl!

93 points! And one of those little flower things you put in the frames! (points are irrelevant and completely unrelated to each other but I thought I'd put them here anyway)

[YoungAdventurer]

I'm not very tech-savvy and I keep getting this glitch with your comic. Going to ask my computer-whiz brother but I may not be able to review sorry! (I have really slow internet and I think that might be a factor.) Does anyone know how to fix this??

[Strontium]

Ack, that looks bad! Tapastic has been loading slowly lately. If you can't see it there, you can always go to my comic's tumblr site!
http://heroesofthantopolis.com

[igneriss]

Thank you so much for your review! ( : as I said before, I understand that my comic is long, so that's okay~ and I'm happy you plan to read the whole of it later! I really hope you enjoy it c:

I'm glad you managed to get a general idea of the story basing on just prologue and chapter 4! To be honest, it's really surprising to me, but in a good way ( :

As for grammar errors- I'm doing my best to translate it to English correctly, but I no longer have a person to check it, so that Microsoft Word tip is really helpful! Didn't know it can correct these kind of mistakes ( : Will try to see if it works on my version of Word if I switch language to English ( : Thank you~

I think with Kestrel the problem is not her forehead, but eyes- they are really big, especially compared to other characters, and compared to her head cx Sometimes they make her look like a frog CX Still, I'm not sure if it'd be better to make her eyes smaller, or to keep her like this, because it makes her recognisable in the comic.

Again, thank you for the review! C: