Ahhh thank you so much for this review! You brought up so many fair points that I will fix in future pages!
My grammar usually sucks so I'm glad that there aren't any noticeable errors because than I'll have to go and fix them ; n ;///
This is my first comic I am posting consistently online so I'm very nervous about my story not fitting to peoples taste so I've sticked to what most people knew, but I'll try stepping out of my comfort zone for this!~
I tried to make Kaiya have flaws in the first chapter but the didn't come out right due to laziness of storytelling and artwork ;x I'll keep this in mind for future pages though so thank you for being straight up with me about that!~
Super glad you like the overall look of the manga! I've been working hard to give it a certain feel to it! Really glad it's professional looking too! Aghhh! >w< And as or the father looking young... I can't draw older people to save my life. No excuses there. I need more practice on that...<-<