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TimCaloweh
Oct '17

I could still use a line artist. My angles aren't that good. No pay but willing to help with writing.

Also could someone tell me if the pace of my comic is too slow.

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SpectreFirst
Oct '17

Frankly speaking I don't understand why do you need another artist to do the linework because I can clearly see that you are using straight lines in your drawings which means that you know how to use line tools\vectors and\or line stabilizers.
If your current drawing software doesn't support line stabilizing you can always switch to Krita and use stabilizer in default brush's tool options, freehand path tool which can smooth your stroke to a various degree (from “iron out little bumps” all the way to “turn every stroke into a line”) before filling it with brush stroke or just use vector layers to do the initial linework. It doesn't even matter if you're drawing with a tablet, a mouse or a digital potato, there are always multiple ways to make your linework look clean and smooth.

Your pacing looks technically correct because right now you have only one character and practically no environments so the only thing you can do is to depict one action at a time, but stories like that require environments for atmosphere and action scenes so I'd recommend to help yourself with Sketchup or Blender. This will be also extremely helpful for your other project because you'll be able to handle machinery much easier.

I don't like to throw around condescending stuff like “do it yourself”, but in your case you will really benefit from learning your software and refining your working pipelines; don't try to dump that work on someone else, try to solve that problem!

TimCaloweh
Oct '17

I got a chromebook and no other programs/software other than Sumopaint. I got no digital pen thingy or touch tablet. All i got is this chromebook and the finger touch slide thing. I can't do much with color and don't know whether its cause of the software or the fact that i just barely learned how to make a very basic comic with a style i'm still getting used to. If I couldn't handle it i would've stopped drawing. All i need is a little help.

The rest of my answer is complicated.

Chrono
Oct '17

Most artists aren't looking for editors, per say, so don't expect to find any line artists from this thread. I would suggest you offer a more feasible reward, as not many are willing to work for free.

I get the situation you are in, but realistically you'll just be wasting your time sitting here and hoping one would roll by. The chances are astronomically slim.