Hey there, I'm in need of a reviewer for my novel, Paint Me a Murder. I just completed the third draft and posted it on here. While I'm happy with the improvements I've made, I feel like there's still some things I need fixing and an extra set of eyes would really help me out. In return, I'll read and review your story too. I'll be as thorough and nit-picky as you'd prefer.
Just a little heads up, this story is a mystery and crime drama. It handles sensitive subjects like drug abuse and violence. This story also features a gay couple, which I don't suppose needs a warning considering how LGBTQ friendly Tapas is, but just thought I'd include that to give you a brief idea of the story.
What I'm looking for help with: Overall plot, building suspense, character development(not just the MC), transitioning chapters, and my ending. Boy, you have no idea how much I've struggled with my ending. It's still nowhere near perfect, but I'm satisfied enough with it. That doesn't limit what you should point out. Feel free to critique everything, including grammar and spelling mistakes.
Scheduling: This is completely up to you, as I'm in no hurry. However many chapters you can review a week is fine with me. We can either do this directly on Tapas or I can share a Google Doc, which might be easier to point particular issues out.
Just reply here on this thread and we can work something out! Feel free to ask any questions you might have too. Here's the link to my novel so you can check it out and see if it's something you'd be willing to read.