Man, I won't be able to read your comic right now, but I will later, for sure.
This feels really unique. Your art style is awesome. I liked it a great deal, I'm impressed.
To offer a second opinion (no easy answers here haha), I love the excess of shadows. I think it works with your style. It's almost impressionistic, in a way, pretty crazy.
I also half agree with the lettering comment. I do think you could toy with different font sizes and the panels could be done a little more graciously. Last panel's dialogue box is misaligned, for example. And why is it kind of transparent? It only half works, for me.
Still, I do think you can make some cool effects with a font and style like that, this more designy boxed formal choice in storytelling. I'd recommend one of the comics written and drawn by Jonathan Hickman. I think he does something similar from what you tried with great elegance.
The only thing I kind of dislike on this page is actually all the angles. They actually feel really arbitrary, more an exercise in form than in storytelling. The way I see it, the constant changing of angles doesn't enhance or represents the story being told. Why is panel 5 shot in an extreme plongee angle? Because it looks cool? You know. Panel 8 also looks like someone is watching wolf guy. It's a convention and the mind simply wonders when you see it, you know. At least done it this way. The way I see it, an angle should serve the story. And it's not like it's bad, it's really well done, it just seems to mean nothing. Angles change so much and so drastically it ends up meaning nothing, it distracts me. I don't know if you read something by Steve Dillon (Preacher, yeeahh) or Inio Asano (Solanin, Nijigahara Holograph), but I think their style is amazing because they're so economic and spot on with their storytelling choices. Preacher's storytelling is so tight it's crazy.
Still, that's the only thing. Your art style is amazing and the narrative gives this really expansive, ''cinematographic'' feel. The aesthetic seems like a crazy Shadowrun inspired action nightmare. Keep on going!!