Hey and welcome to to Tapas.
I just wanted to ask, is there any specific feedback that you're looking for eg. plot, character, art style etc.
I'm just going to add my general feedback here since I read through the first five chapters and don't want to spam the forum. (I'm not an artist so won't be able to give you critique on your art).
So the story looks quite interesting. You have me asking questions about the bakery and why Fox does what she does. I can't say much about the characters as it's to early in the story.
One thing I would look at is grammar. There seems to be a few mistakes. Also, I'd recommend working on your blurb a little. It was a bit confusing.
Anyway, I hope this helps